Scientific research should be carried out and controlled by the governments rather than private companies. Do you agree or disagree?
Some people think that the governments should do and conduct the scientific research not private enterprises. This essay agrees with this statement because of the benefits and the safety of the community.
From the perspective of private companies, some scientific researches which are carried out by private enterprises can lead some negative or even the serious influences on society. An explanation for this is that the company values the profit above the result and the effect of the research. Hence, the enterprises would invest in scientific researches which bring the financial benefit for them even that research can cause the negative influence on community and society. The experiment on developing fossil fuels such as gas, for instance, can release hazardous wastes and these wastes cause many dangerous effects on the environment in the long-term period, but these sources can bring the huge profit for the company in the short time, so many private enterprises would still invest in this research, no matter how it can destroy the environment.
From the perspective of governments, the safety and the benefit of society are the first priority of the governments. So government would do the scientific researches which can bring the benefits to the community and society. Furthermore, instead of caring about the profit, the governments would focus on ensuring the high-quality of product of the research and the safety of the people who use it. For example, although the experiment on producing renewable energy may waste a large amount of money and time, yet the governments still invest in it, this is because when the research completed, it will be beneficial for the environment and society.
In conclusion, governments should take the responsibility in doing and controlling the scientific research because the merits and safety of the society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, hence, if, may, so, still, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1573.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.31418918919 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90537201426 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.476351351351 0.561755894193 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 486.9 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 79.5679448725 49.4020404114 161% => OK
Chars per sentence: 143.0 106.682146367 134% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.9090909091 20.7667163134 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.18181818182 7.06120827912 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.254618612314 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.117423713975 0.084324248473 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0984907942584 0.0667982634062 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.191000505841 0.151304729494 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0566487218637 0.056905535591 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.0 13.0946893788 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.5 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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