Scientist predict that cars will be driven by computers in the near future.
What are the possible causes for this? Will it be a positive or negative development?
Nowadays, we cannot emphasize the importance of human depending on technology too much. The lifestyle has been totally changed after a variety of technological inventions. There is no doubt that the driven system controlled by the computer will be possible to be designed.
The reasons why scientists have innovated auto-driven system is that it would solve many urban cities problems. Traffic jam has been a serious issue for every development area. The advantage of the auto-driver system is that it could analysts the road traffic situation, in the teams on avoiding road congested. It is precious that saving time for the commuters. Moreover, driving by computers can prevent car accidents. It is true that 90% of highway accidents cause by artificial errors.
By using the computer to control the driving system, the pollutions in the environment will be decline. Firstly, what cause air pollution is the high density of carbon dioxide. While facing a traffic jam, tremendous carbon dioxide is expelled by the vehicles, led to serious air pollution issues. This might put pressure on the quality of air, and also damage our health. Secondly, the computer can calculate the most efficient way to save car energy, this function not only cut down driver’s expenditure but also reduce un-recycle resources consumed by the car such as fossil oil.
In conclusion, I believed that the scientist conceptions on cars driven by computer will soon be implemented, this innovative technology design achieved a higher standard for our life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, while, in conclusion, no doubt, such as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1301.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 246.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.28861788618 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96035189615 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88453233694 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.642276422764 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 405.0 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.9142392665 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.7333333333 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.6 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.32553359984 0.244688304435 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0919537820071 0.084324248473 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.10744583553 0.0667982634062 161% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.196819939487 0.151304729494 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0694335850601 0.056905535591 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.95 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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