Scientists believe that in the near future cars will be driven by computers. What are the reasons behind it? Would it be a positive or negative development? Give your own opinion.
The computer has brought significant changes to our lives in recent years. Some scientists claim that automobiles will be ruled by the state-of-the-art technologies in the next years. Yet, there remains some disagreement as to whether the overall effect of this technology has been positive or negative. While there are certainly valid agreements to the contrary, I personally believe that the advantages of the driver-computer far outweigh its drawbacks.
First of all, it is an indisputable fact that car industry is altering day by day. Auto brands such as Toyota, Tesla, BMV offer groundbreaking approaches that provide more comfort and flexibility. Moreover, some car concerns devised vehicles that use the water instead of the benzene. Also, it is not surprising that global market has the car that is able to fly if it necessary. Consequently, it is time to discover the car that drives by one click of laptop or tab. The whole world is expecting this treasured moment. In my view, all these achievements will be conquered thanks to cutting-edge technologies and groundbreaking finds.
If these incredible and powerful tools produce, they facilitate convenient life for society members. More importantly, computer driving will decrease the number of car accident and death-tool since they do not speak with a mobile phone and drink alcohol. The second positive moment that people never lost since all car-computers will equip with a GPS-maps and special tools that find a destination. Also, parents, who drive the car, will save their energy after the work and can dedicate it to children upbringing.
By way of conclusion, I once again reaffirm my position that the computer driver has a positive impact on modern society because it can ensure comfortable life and drop the number of road hazards.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 223, Rule ID: WHETHER[6]
Message: Can you shorten this phrase to just 'whether', or rephrase the sentence to avoid "as to"?
Suggestion: whether
.... Yet, there remains some disagreement as to whether the overall effect of this technology h...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, first, if, moreover, second, so, while, as to, such as, first of all, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1524.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23711340206 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02443374698 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.635738831615 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 468.9 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.5320842659 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.25 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1875 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.25 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.144849026434 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0415836049956 0.084324248473 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0364494085348 0.0667982634062 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0786180450758 0.151304729494 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0197598339998 0.056905535591 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.98 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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