Shops should give a preference in selling local food rather than imported food. Do you agree or disagree with this statement.
Shops should focus on selling local products in comparison with imported food. I disagree with this statement ,as world's business may face a bankruptcy and there might be no place for marketing other products.
Local food is tested and people can purchase the product without any doubting ,however selling only local products, might have a negative influence on other countries business. For example,Coca-Cola is the most famous and sold product in our world if one shop in one country gives a restriction ,this does not matter. However, if certain amount of countries restrict it ,there might appear an issue for their product and a company. As well as, marketing, the most popular place for advertising products is a shop. It should be noticed that there are various types of advertisement as using a poster in public places, transports or just showing a video with a product on big display. Almost all of them can promote a product pretty good ,but the shops are more helpful as almost everyday the majority of people go to purchase food or any refreshments.
Turning to another disadvantage of selling local products are dominant and monopoly. These issues might impact not so good on local products on local products which is checked by world experts and they also do not have an opportunity to find any bad sides of product. So, in order to prevent it ,having a large amount of international products with local ones, may make consider local companies to produce it better with attractive packaging and with a good quality. From competition ,there are many disadvantages and the main one is a price. Roughly, every person want to buy a high-quality product with an acceptable price. Definetely, there appears again competition, however very high-quality products are sold even without any discounts and making prices lower and the reason is that they are known very good, so many people believe that tyis price worth it.
By way of conclusion, having an international products in shops can increase the quality of local ones and decrease the high price of it. As a result, only good products are tried to be produced and people, then get satisfied.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 111, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ted food. I disagree with this statement ,as worlds business may face a bankruptcy...
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Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...no place for marketing other products. Local food is tested and people can purc...
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Line 2, column 80, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...urchase the product without any doubting ,however selling only local products, mig...
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Line 2, column 190, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , Coca-Cola
...on other countries business. For example,Coca-Cola is the most famous and sold product in ...
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Line 2, column 296, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... shop in one country gives a restriction ,this does not matter. However, if certai...
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... certain amount of countries restrict it ,there might appear an issue for their pr...
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Line 2, column 737, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...f them can promote a product pretty good ,but the shops are more helpful as almost...
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Line 2, column 780, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...ut the shops are more helpful as almost everyday the majority of people go to purchase f...
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Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... to purchase food or any refreshments. Turning to another disadvantage of selli...
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Line 3, column 296, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...s of product. So, in order to prevent it ,having a large amount of international p...
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Line 3, column 411, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'betters', 'wells'?
Suggestion: betters; wells
... consider local companies to produce it better with attractive packaging and with a go...
^^^^^^
Line 3, column 485, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...nd with a good quality. From competition ,there are many disadvantages and the mai...
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Line 3, column 645, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...h an acceptable price. Definetely, there appears again competition, however very ...
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Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ple believe that tyis price worth it. By way of conclusion, having an internat...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, so, then, well, for example, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1796.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 362.0 315.596192385 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.96132596685 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36191444098 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75665694907 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.555248618785 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 568.8 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.0343868499 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.25 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.625 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0625 7.06120827912 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.01903807615 279% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199697432737 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0794167524338 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0948844093741 0.0667982634062 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154928709059 0.151304729494 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.112326394758 0.056905535591 197% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.61 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 111, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ted food. I disagree with this statement ,as worlds business may face a bankruptcy...
^^
Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...no place for marketing other products. Local food is tested and people can purc...
^^
Line 2, column 80, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...urchase the product without any doubting ,however selling only local products, mig...
^^
Line 2, column 190, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , Coca-Cola
...on other countries business. For example,Coca-Cola is the most famous and sold product in ...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 296, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... shop in one country gives a restriction ,this does not matter. However, if certai...
^^
Line 2, column 371, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... certain amount of countries restrict it ,there might appear an issue for their pr...
^^
Line 2, column 737, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...f them can promote a product pretty good ,but the shops are more helpful as almost...
^^
Line 2, column 780, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...ut the shops are more helpful as almost everyday the majority of people go to purchase f...
^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... to purchase food or any refreshments. Turning to another disadvantage of selli...
^^
Line 3, column 296, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...s of product. So, in order to prevent it ,having a large amount of international p...
^^
Line 3, column 411, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'betters', 'wells'?
Suggestion: betters; wells
... consider local companies to produce it better with attractive packaging and with a go...
^^^^^^
Line 3, column 485, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...nd with a good quality. From competition ,there are many disadvantages and the mai...
^^
Line 3, column 645, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...h an acceptable price. Definetely, there appears again competition, however very ...
^^
Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ple believe that tyis price worth it. By way of conclusion, having an internat...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, so, then, well, for example, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1796.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 362.0 315.596192385 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.96132596685 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36191444098 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75665694907 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.555248618785 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 568.8 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.0343868499 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.25 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.625 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0625 7.06120827912 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.01903807615 279% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199697432737 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0794167524338 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0948844093741 0.0667982634062 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154928709059 0.151304729494 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.112326394758 0.056905535591 197% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.61 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.