The chart below shows the changes in there different areas of crime in Manchester city center from 2003-2012
The diagram illustrates the changes in burglary,car theft and robbery in Manchester city center from 2009-2012.
Overall,the highest type of crime in diagram, is car theft which had a rise in the given period and reached a boom in the last year(2012) with 3,500 cases. Turning to, burglary, it was the highest one (3,500),however fell sharply in 2008 to 1,000 and did not have any changes during four years(2008-2012). The last type of crime,robbery,did not reach high points and stayed unchanged in the given period.
Starting with, burglary,it had a boom and reached roughly the highest point in the chart in 2003, however it decreased to 2,500 from 3,500 cases.Finally,it fell sharply in 2008 and had an approximately the lowest case of crime in the given period.As for,car theft,it had 2,000 cases in 2003,then had a little flactuation during 3 years(2003-2006).It tried to rise,but it did not have any increases in 2008. With the comparison of all given types of crimes, robbery was the lowest,it had a little flactuation as car theft in 2006, however it almost reached 0 cases in 2008.
Burglary,roughly reached 1,500,but then it fell slowly again,to 1,000 and did not has any rise until the last given year(2012). Turning to car theft,it started rising unnoticeably and reached 2,500 cases in 2010 and there was no changes in left period (2010-2012). Finally,the last type of crime in city centre of Manchester, robbery did not increase in 4 years, but almost reached the lowest point in the given chart,ending up less than 500 cases in 2012
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 33.7804878049 104% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 835.0 965.302439024 87% => OK
No of words: 163.0 196.424390244 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1226993865 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57311423478 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.63988303954 2.65546596893 137% => OK
Unique words: 92.0 106.607317073 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.564417177914 0.547539520022 103% => OK
syllable_count: 233.1 283.868780488 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 1.53170731707 326% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 8.94146341463 45% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 40.0 22.4926829268 178% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 76.152396548 43.030603864 177% => OK
Chars per sentence: 208.75 112.824112599 185% => OK
Words per sentence: 40.75 22.9334400587 178% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.75 5.23603664747 33% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 1.0 3.83414634146 26% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 21.0 1.69756097561 1237% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.247129750546 0.215688989381 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.189128343238 0.103423049105 183% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.146239551929 0.0843802449381 173% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.247129750546 0.15604864568 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0819641961636 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 23.1 13.2329268293 175% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.8 61.2550243902 78% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.5 10.3012195122 160% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.3 11.4140731707 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.79 8.06136585366 121% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 40.7170731707 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.5 11.4329268293 171% => OK
gunning_fog: 18.0 10.9970731707 164% => OK
text_standard: 20.0 11.0658536585 181% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum two paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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