Should animals be used in testing new drugs and procedures?
Gives reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Write at least 250 words.
An estimated 26 million animals are used every year in the United States for scientific and commercial testing. The use of animals in researches essential for inventing new drugs. Although, it is legally to do testing new medicines or producers and some reasons also for avoiding this idea.
After many years from technology and new education, now we have to discover new treatments for dangerous diseases .So, officially all drugs have to be tasted on animals for safety before they can be used in humans. There are many examples of animals tests include forcing mice and rats of force feeding dogs pesticides and dripping corrosive chemicals into rabbits.
So that, Scientists have many reasons for testing in animals , Some disease like Asthma involve very complex physiological processes that can be studied in a whole living animals.
In addition, through testing on animals we are able to ensure any risks of a drugs are identified and mimised before it is tasted on humans.
On the other hand , there is no need to cause pain and suffering to animals , we can now inventing new technology to do the experiments on it instead of animals.
In the nutshell, there are many reasons about testing on animals and still the two opinions are convinced , but why we should make animals suffer or have pain and bad feelings. Animals have feelings and spirit we have to care of it. We can do better if we use our technology or system to know new discovers and avoid dying or harming animals.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, still, in addition, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1240.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 255.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.86274509804 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59457161233 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.560784313725 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 407.7 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.3916136622 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.727272727 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1818181818 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.09090909091 7.06120827912 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.240862861923 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0999381147654 0.084324248473 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0411452477658 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127833188908 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0460879976647 0.056905535591 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.37 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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