“Some people think that zoos are cruel and should be closed down. Others, however, believe that zoos can be useful in protecting wild animals.”
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
A controversy exists regarding the existence of zoos, some people assume that animals are treated harshly, so the zoos should be closed down, other people believe that zoos play an important role in wildlife conservation. Both views have their arguments that will be addressed, coupled with my own perspective on this controversial issue.
On one hand, the opponents feel that zoos are just a source of gaining money, and the animals are suffering for different factors, such as contamination because of some visitors, in addition, a lack of freedom owing to captivity. Regarding the healthy feeding, when animals are born in constrained places, they become dependent on humans, therefore, it is considered as a huge burden for the zoos’ budget. However, zoos struggle to stay profitable, and some zoos are failing to meet their annual financial targets.
On the other hand, the supporters believe that zoos are a good environment for the animals’ safety, where scientists are allowed to study animals and their behaviors. Additionally, zoos help to protect lots of rare and weak species like pandas and zebras from predators and humans who hunt animals. Furthermore, from an economic perspective, zoos provide job opportunities and income for the local areas, as well as the money can be used for conservation projects and research.
In conclusion, the drawbacks and benefits are easily found in keeping those places opened. In my opinion, I completely agree with their existence because zoos are one of the important educational and interesting places. They make a great day out for families to escape the pressure of life. Children, in particular, enjoy learning about animals.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, regarding, so, therefore, well, in addition, in conclusion, in particular, such as, as well as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1425.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.29739776952 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88877484542 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.628252788104 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 448.2 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.7677619231 49.4020404114 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.75 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4166666667 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.8333333333 7.06120827912 182% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.327131782902 0.244688304435 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0971535027154 0.084324248473 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.086751265803 0.0667982634062 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.182878074098 0.151304729494 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.101132375202 0.056905535591 178% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.76 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.6 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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