Should experiments be conducted on animals for the benefits of human beings?
Give reasons for our answer and include any relevant examples from you own knowledge or experience.
Over the past decades, it is pretty common that the scientists use the experiment on animals to serve the purpose of human being’s development, especially to develop a new vaccine or a medicine. Some people protest this this kind of test on animals, but for me, I am convinced that it is really necessary for the benefits of human beings.
Firstly, it is easy to see that this progress will reduce a lot of fatal risks for human by doing trials on animals first. For example, Apollo has also tried to send a dog into space before they have officially dispatched human. If they did not do this and there were some technical issues which were not detected in advance during the voyage with a human in his first trip into space. His life would be in danger.
Furthermore, it would be effective in term of cost and time for the test on animals. As we know, some animals are very popular for experiments such as white mouse an dog. And they are not so expensive for the repeated trials. The supply of these animal is also available anytime accordingly to demand of the scientists. Although, there are actually some experiments which may require the specific subjects to test such as monkey or horse. These kinds of special requirements would be more costly.
In conclusion, even though there are some people are not happy with the conduction of experiment on animals. I still support this method since, personally I think that it is for the benefits and development of human beings.
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Suggestion: this
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, actually, also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, may, really, so, still, for example, i think, in conclusion, kind of, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1233.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 261.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.72413793103 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58914832019 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.582375478927 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 398.7 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.4658326043 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.0714285714 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6428571429 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.2857142857 7.06120827912 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.254785022707 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0891827552049 0.084324248473 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0394923578931 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160607158432 0.151304729494 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0278043949523 0.056905535591 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 13.0946893788 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.1 12.4159519038 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.16 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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