Should wealthy nation be required to share their wealth among poorer nations by providing such things as food and education ?Or is it the responsibility of the government of poorer nation to look after their themselves?
The dynamics of the economy varies from boundary to boundary. Some countries are wealthy enough to look after themselves and while others are facing financial crisis. Sharing of the amenities and moral duty of the government are discussed in the following paragraphs.
To begin with,facts and figures show that the gradual difference in the wealth among countries. For an illustration,the developed countries like America has enough amenities, facilities, sources and techniques to provide their citizens a sense of security. In spite of this, the poorer nations like Africa still comprises the are...
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that the gradual difference in the wealth among countries
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Sentence: Each and every country is rich with some distinct resources and by exporting the same, a country could concrete the economics of the country.
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Suggestion: Refer to could and concrete
Sentence: Furthermore,on the name of humanity and fraternity, the wealthier nations must step forward and do almsgiving.
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