Smoking is injurious to health .By smoking people face a number of difficulties in their life because if one person is smoker and they cause a harmful disease in one' life .we are living in global village, we see various places where masses do smoke ,it is very bad habbit.Therefore, I agree with the mention statement it should be banned on community places and will discuss arguments in subsequent pargraphs.
To embark upon , there are various reasons behind this essay, but the first and formeost is that if people do smoking in open places then they create a number of diseases in another person life .Moreover, one can spoil their future throughout smoking because many masses have addict for smoking then another person also adopt same things after seenig these kind of habbits from smoker. Furthermore, nowadays , plethora of youngster do smoke in their life for entertainment themselves, this is a wrong way for youngones because these habbit also cause aliments in future. For instance, in many countries people face asthma problem because they do smoke.
Smoking on public places does not only creates detrimental effects to non- smokers life, but it also pollute our environment throughout the smoking in public places such as bus stand , railway station and many more places where masses do smoking without any restrictions . Besides it, goverment should putt some efforts for stoping this bad habbit . Neverthe less , parents should also prevent their children regarding drugs habbit then people can aware these kind of things and they can save their life in future .For example , in recent year the oxford uinversity surveys that 60%people who are doing smoking in every country and cause health related issues .
To wrap up , smoking should be banned in every corner of the world and people should aware these kind of habbits government should take advise for the people and also should take punishment for smoker , this is main way to stop the smoking in public places.
- Smoking not only harms the smoker, but also those who are nearby. Therefore, smoking should be banned in public places.To what extent do you agree or disagree? 67
- Some people say that health care and education should be the responsibility of the government but others think that it is not the responsibility of the governmentDiscuss both views and give your opinion. 56
- Today more and more people are using mobile phones and computers. Thus, people are losing the ability to communicate face to face. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 67
- Some people say that health care and education should be the responsibility of the government but others think that it is not the responsibility of the governmentDiscuss both views and give your opinion. 56
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, furthermore, if, moreover, regarding, so, then, therefore, for example, for instance, kind of, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1660.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 327.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07645259939 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25242769721 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4798814505 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.544342507645 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 507.6 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 40.0 20.2975951904 197% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 117.794312257 49.4020404114 238% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 207.5 106.682146367 195% => OK
Words per sentence: 40.875 20.7667163134 197% => OK
Discourse Markers: 16.125 7.06120827912 228% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 28.0 5.01903807615 558% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.299288512722 0.244688304435 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.143539821817 0.084324248473 170% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0737846194442 0.0667982634062 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.211007525346 0.151304729494 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0367285705417 0.056905535591 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 22.9 13.0946893788 175% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 30.88 50.2224549098 61% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.9 11.3001002004 167% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.07 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.19 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 27.0 9.78957915832 276% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 18.0 10.1190380762 178% => OK
text_standard: 27.0 10.7795591182 250% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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