Medical faciities and edification play and important role in person's life .Gone are the days ,masses did not have any more knowledge about medical related and also study but today's people have to much advanced in their society regarding these kind of things .some folk deems that should be responsibilty of the government others opine differently. I agree with the later view point and i will discuss both views in upcoming paragraph.
To emark upon , there are various reason behind this aspect first and the foremost is that if government should take responsibility for the medical service and study purpose then people can motivate and they can gain more knowledge about medical ailments and they can give advice to their near ones. Moreover government should open various high standard school where children can adopt abounded skills in their life rather then taught skills from their parents and elders.For instance, in some countries people belong from poor families if government provide free education and free medical amenities in their life it is good way for their survival.
On ther other hand, some people think that it should not responsibilty of the government it should also people responsibilty for the edification , if masses want to take interest in education then they can get good coummnication skill through education .besides it , masses should take medical subject in their study it good purpose for help in the future .For example , if people have more information regarding study and medical then they can survive their life very well.
To wrap up , i firmly believe that if government take responsibilty for the education then masses should also take responsibily more in their life it is a good way for future career and also will help for their children study .
- Smoking not only harms the smoker, but also those who are nearby. Therefore, smoking should be banned in public places.To what extent do you agree or disagree? 67
- Today more and more people are using mobile phones and computers. Thus, people are losing the ability to communicate face to face. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 67
- Some people say that health care and education should be the responsibility of the government but others think that it is not the responsibility of the governmentDiscuss both views and give your opinion. 56
- Some people say that health care and education should be the responsibility of the government but others think that it is not the responsibility of the governmentDiscuss both views and give your opinion. 56
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, if, moreover, regarding, so, then, well, for example, for instance, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1503.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 293.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12969283276 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5849316369 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.505119453925 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 468.0 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 16.0721442886 37% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 48.0 20.2975951904 236% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 119.692661986 49.4020404114 242% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 250.5 106.682146367 235% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 48.8333333333 20.7667163134 235% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 17.0 7.06120827912 241% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 20.0 5.01903807615 398% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.187433775433 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103382125278 0.084324248473 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0305770280744 0.0667982634062 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122095304815 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0407811868809 0.056905535591 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 27.1 13.0946893788 207% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 22.76 50.2224549098 45% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 22.0 11.3001002004 195% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.36 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.98 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 9.78957915832 184% => OK
gunning_fog: 21.2 10.1190380762 210% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 22.0 10.7795591182 204% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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