The argument over social media has been ongoing for years. Some people consider it to be beneficial in terms of communication. From my perspective, I partly agree with this idea and will discuss several compelling reasons in the following essay.
On the one hand, social media definitely enhances the quality of communication. First and foremost, it is a marvelous means to maintain and strengthen our existing relationships. Thanks to the invention of the internet and the enormous number of social platforms, we now can connect to our far-distance relatives or friends, for example, to have some catch-up with them, update each other’s lives. By this, bonds will never fade or become weaker. Secondly, social media provides people with tremendous opportunities to build new relationships and expand their circle of friends. Because of its typical feature of allowing people to connect through two electric devices, it enables us to communicate with others at any time and from anywhere. This helps improve and create international friendship.
On the other hand, social media does harm to communication to some extent. The main problem is that, like a twofold knife, it has both positive (due to the point mentioned in the previous paragraph) and negative impacts on real life relationships. As I have mentioned, social media creates great chances for virtual friendships to flourish, but if one pays too much attention to this kind of relationship, they can easily neglect their actual friends and their beloved ones. This surely takes a toll on individuals’ real relationships.
In conclusion, social media has both advantages and disadvantages concerning communication.
- The diagrams below show the changes that have taken place at Queen Mary Hospital since its construction in 1960
- People think that government should increase the cost of fuel for cars and other vehicles to solve environmental problems Give your opinion 78
- Social media has replaced the traditional methods of communication and people use more and more social media to communicate and to follow news and events Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages 78
- The diagram shows the small scale production of smoked fish 10
- The maps below show the changes that have taken place at Queen Mary Hospital since its construction in 1960 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant Write at least 150 words
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 424, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...other’s lives. By this, bonds will never fade or become weaker. Secondly, social ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, second, secondly, so, then, for example, in conclusion, kind of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1427.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 263.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.42585551331 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.11073095154 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.6463878327 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 432.9 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 56.9931769795 49.4020404114 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.1333333333 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5333333333 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.53333333333 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.226842541608 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0793827245577 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0856003551702 0.0667982634062 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162541552189 0.151304729494 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0556712821909 0.056905535591 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.92 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.16 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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