The society would be benefit from a ban on all forms of advertising because it serves no useful purpose
an can even damaging.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
Some people argue that advertisements are not only useless, but also can be harmful. Due to the fact that ads do not bring any beneficial results to the society, it should be completely banned. From my point of view, I strongly disagree of this perspective, primarily because advertising can play an important role on society in several aspects. For instance, it is helpful to divulgate health campaigns, stimulate people to use determined product to prevent some diseases, as well as foster marketing and consequentially, the economy.
Nowadays, marketing and advertising campaigns are the most effective way to communicate and educate people. Governments and law maker use the advertising strategy to promote and broadcast messages that can be crucial for the citizens. Campaigns are made to inform parents about the importance of vaccination of their children to avoid illness. Studies proves that after massive advertising, the children mortality rate have sharply decreased.
It is generally acknowledged that, skin cancer is top common cancer in today’s world. Therefore, cosmetics industries have reinforced the use of sunscreen to prevent skin cancer showing beautiful tanned girls on TV commercial and Internet, in order reduce the rate of cancer incidence on the population as well as sell their products.
Marketing also contribute widely to economy, many businesses are supported financially by adverting. Even technologies institutions like Google,Youtube is based on publicity and marketing. Television carries charge a significant amount of money to bind commercial messages to their audience. An evidence that commercial is profitable and effective in many ways is that only 30 seconds during a halftime football game can cost CA$500.000 boosting t
To sum up, as an advocate of freedom, I disagree that all advertising should be vanished mainly because benefits outweigh the drawbacks. Ads are can be seen as form of service that convey important messages to the society, nevertheless it can be misused sometimes. However, it is up to each person to decide what commercial message are relevant, and also which ads should disregard.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, nevertheless, second, so, therefore, well, as for, for instance, as well as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1832.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 333.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.5015015015 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27180144563 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.11560657041 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.603603603604 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 582.3 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.170009455 49.4020404114 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.5 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8125 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.875 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.19354017496 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0533331116995 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0576643901712 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0942471549415 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0716506573089 0.056905535591 126% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.62 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.89 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 111.0 78.4519038076 141% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.