Some cities create housing areas by providing taller buildings. Others create housing by building houses on a wider area of land what solution is better?
Housing space is a major consideration in constructing a new house. Urban areas have small land to create a spacious home and by means of this they build more rooms in a taller establishment. In contrast, some housing construction builds in a broad land. According to my perspective, people have their own preferences in building a house, regardless of location and structure; most people consider choosing a home in their comfortability and safety.
In the one hand, city population is vastly growing because of migration of people from countryside due to accessibility to all facilities, establishment, career opportunity and schools for a better future. Therefore, living in city causes congestion that lead to build up of home for accommodation. Government and private sector find a solution by raising a taller establishment for a rental flat, to accommodate all in needs. Limited space makes some people uncomfortable, no space for playing with kids, gardening and poor ventilation. Safety is not guarantee in this matter, more people are staying in a building and any untoward circumstances might be happen like earthquake and fire.
On the other hand, erecting houses in a spacious land is more beneficial and more merits. Spacious room, playing area and recreation is possible. Family is more comfortable especially with small children. Owners have freedom to do interior and expand the place of your choice. In the backyard, family can do barbecue and gardening as well. The downside of this, owing a land property is costly and not all people can afford it.
In conclusion, there is no place like home. People have own choice where to leave; in a condominium or land with wider space. Safety and comfort is consider first, as well as place that family and friends reunited and make memories.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, so, therefore, well, in conclusion, in contrast, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1521.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 295.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15593220339 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04372048904 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.576271186441 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 477.0 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.9122601425 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.5 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3888888889 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.72222222222 7.06120827912 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.245008492508 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0708131091603 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0850479937798 0.0667982634062 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132849786654 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.096113342218 0.056905535591 169% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.35 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.82 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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