Digital communication technology, such as email, instant messaging and social media has improved communication and connections between people. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays advance communication technology has a vital impact in everyday lives. By means of accessible connection to other people and provide information, i strongly believe that it really helps a lot.
Owing to the rampant improvement of Digital communication, one clear example is an email, one evident benefit is sending and receiving important messages anywhere and anytime, aside from this it has allotted storage for personalize files and pictures. Thru exchanging messages good relation to others builds up.
On the other hand, almost half of the world’s population using social media by the help of latest innovation, mostly people are having their own accounts. Through this various application, long-time friends and relatives reconnected and people who are not able to see personally. You can also post variety of photos, videos and memorable event happening in your life. Additionally, it’s a one way to acquainted set of friends. Furthermore, everyone can play interactive and educational games downloaded in the site. Moreover, people become aware to the latest news and information happening in the environment.
However, there’s a drawback in excessive exposure to social media, Obviously, most people spending more time in their mobile than studying and personal relationship to the world. Personal communication are lacking within the family. Because of the public exposure, personal life becomes affected.
In conclusion, due to high technology in communication, people became attached to social media and other sites that people can be reconnected with friends and family. Everybody should be intelligent and be vigilant in the limitation when browsing and posting in social media.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 89, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'of the latest'.
Suggestion: of the latest
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, if, moreover, really, so, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1465.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 259.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.65637065637 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02060326195 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.660231660232 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 470.7 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 53.5671541152 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.6666666667 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2666666667 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.73333333333 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.215934637557 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0590952602558 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0429489890331 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108227818717 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0227382417171 0.056905535591 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.3 50.2224549098 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.25 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.15 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.