Some commentators feel that grandparents should live together with their children and grandchildren, while others say that elderly people should be encouraged to live independently. Consider the possible arguments on both sides of this debate, and reach your own conclusion.
It remains to be in question whether the aged live with their extended family or separately. Although some people argue that living together heartens grandparents, others claim every individual should be independent. This essay will look at some strong viewpoints made by two opposing sides.
It seems that all possible explanations for grandparents living with children have been summarized in one word: support; because old people are less able to manage their daily lives. Proponents mostly emphasize that being surrounded or getting involved with grandchildren`s enthusiastically youthful lives would be a constant source of happiness for grandparents, leading to lower levels of depression. It is also true that in case of incidents, like rubbery or heart attack, the elderly will be provided with attention and care to a greater extent, so rarely will they experience anxiety over future. As a last point, reduction in costs of housing is a matter which cannot be ignored.
By contrast, those believing the idea of grandparents living independently often state that every age group has its own needs, resulting in different lifestyles. For instance, the old usually avoid being in a noisy place continuously as tolerance decreases by age, therefore being visited by their children on a frequent basis causes a more cheerful sense for them. Besides, today`s rapidly changing world have made people busier and houses smaller, so it may be reasonable to shift responsibility for affording old people safety and health from family members to government. Also, living independently appears essential to prevent the aged from social isolation.
To conclude, I consider living separately will be more favorable to all concerned unless it exposes any individual to risk, since peace, privacy and self-esteem are of necessity of a life and the young force of society should focus on serving the country more than perpetual treatment.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, if, look, may, so, therefore, thus, as to, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1649.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 303.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.44224422442 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0488190905 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.666666666667 0.561755894193 119% => OK
syllable_count: 516.6 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 65.2297222642 49.4020404114 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.416666667 106.682146367 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.25 20.7667163134 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.83333333333 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.286328921159 0.244688304435 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0987480550653 0.084324248473 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0639415097446 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.168963377637 0.151304729494 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0694889313508 0.056905535591 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.8 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.57 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.78 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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