Creative artists should always be given the freedom to express their own ideas (in words, pictures, music or film) in whichever way they wish. There should be no government restrictions on what they do.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
Art is the mirror of an artist`s soul and mind, and limitations cast a shadow on that mirror. It means to portray a new issue or an old one from a new point of view, so art is the ability of creation. No creative art will appear or live long while governmental restrictions are governing. However, absolute freedom will be problematic when society is not artistically mature. Hence, the government should act only as a regulatory body who tries to keep a balance among different sections of the society.
First and foremost, governmental restraints will result in partiality of artworks` assessment and exhibition. Under this circumstance, the arts take priority depending on the extent of their adherence to the rules and social standards not their innovation and artistic value. Thus, a poor diversity of the arts will limit artistic arena of a country that affects both people and artists. The repetitive pattern of artworks makes people uninterested; fewer writings are read since no various content have been introduced and fewer artistic events are welcomed since copied productions have exhausted audiences. On the other hand, artists will look for a new channel to present their ingenious perspectives. Immigration is mostly the only option which can lead to a decline in artworks quality due to economic or mental problems of immigration. Similarly, inside the country, the quality of art education will fall because bounded artistic minds are in the educational positions. This is a crisis situation where art growth is a matter of profound concern.
Furthermore, artists have a duty of illustrating truths. They are responsible to make impression, inform all or give a solution about different types of issues like beauty, discrimination, pleasure, pain or everything existing within the heart of the society. In effect, every creative art has a unique message from society to society. For instance, an Iranian photographer took innovatory photos during Iran-Iraq war including Iranian baby soldiers and thoughtful scenes of violence and kindness between two parties. His pictures were heavily censored in his home country by government that made him to publish them in the second country after immigration. The end of the war is thirty one years old by now but as time passes every single photo of him is still clarifying new aspects of war; aspects which are being denied by authorities or are being forgotten by people. If this original mind had not been allowed to be in the front line, the real face of war would never become revealed.
Benefiting society, art also has a dangerous face. It can be offensive to some while being inspired to others. Governments might prefer applying pressure and constraint on arts to prevent any probable disturbance or criticism of itself. Definitely, this is not an occasion on which a modern society can be based. Instead, peaceful remedies are necessary to be used: artists should clarify their purpose to all, especially those of whom that is predicted to take the artwork as insult; governments must be aware that the arts are going to be exhibited in where and to whom and provide security for everyone; and each part of the society need to be mature enough in order to understand that freedom of expression is an essential right for every individual. A modern society has deeply realized that the best reply to an artwork is a corresponding artwork.
To conclude, governmental restrictions kill both creativity and art, in contrast, absolute freedom causes anarchy. In order to neither confine inventiveness nor making disorder, governments would be better behaving as a regulator who promises freedom of expression for all in safety and put its effort into growing awareness of whole society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, hence, however, if, look, second, similarly, so, still, thus, while, for instance, in contrast, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 36.0 19.5258426966 184% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 12.4196629213 129% => OK
Conjunction : 25.0 14.8657303371 168% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.3162921348 150% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 33.0505617978 79% => OK
Preposition: 84.0 58.6224719101 143% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 12.9106741573 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3172.0 2235.4752809 142% => OK
No of words: 612.0 442.535393258 138% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18300653595 5.05705443957 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.97379470361 4.55969084622 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92978686136 2.79657885939 105% => OK
Unique words: 343.0 215.323595506 159% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.56045751634 0.4932671777 114% => OK
syllable_count: 1013.4 704.065955056 144% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 9.0 4.99550561798 180% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.38483146067 160% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 28.0 20.2370786517 138% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 76.7463603471 60.3974514979 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.285714286 118.986275619 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8571428571 23.4991977007 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.14285714286 5.21951772744 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 7.80617977528 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 10.2758426966 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 5.13820224719 214% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.177861891501 0.243740707755 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0435841299769 0.0831039109588 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0395425991698 0.0758088955206 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101337425938 0.150359130593 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0289432227981 0.0667264976115 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 14.1392134831 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 48.8420337079 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 12.1743820225 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 12.1639044944 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.35 8.38706741573 111% => OK
difficult_words: 181.0 100.480337079 180% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.8971910112 76% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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