it is commonplace issue that many various organizations tend to being sponsor of individual or team sports to advertise their products. Some people believe this incident can be harmful for global sport; however, some others disagree with this notion. In my opinion, this matter has both dimensions that should be considered.
On the one hand, some genres of sports in different parts of countries have poor financial condition that should be supported. In this case, companies are the best choice to aid sport teams for entrance the competitions and additionally, it could be an appropriate chance for enterprises to promote their fame. Furthermore, this event is useful for unknown players and teams to show their skills in media and other types of advertisements then they might motivate powerful sponsors around the world. Therefore, it would be beneficial for both of the organizations and sport society.
On the other hand, the number of businesses that play role as supporter for sport teams are increasing. In fact, this could be a menace for sport industry due to abuse and overuse players and teams as commercial purposes such as FIBA that uses the name of Coca Cola on player's uniform. Obviously, this occurrence has intensified recently that is a serious concern for sport followers and fans. Because sport competitors lose their merit and worthwhile who were a mighty symbol for people before. Hence, I think there should be some restrictions for contracts between sponsors and teams to hinder this destructive system.
In conclusion, there probably positive and negative aspects happen for both enterprises that are sponsor and several sport teams that have financial problem and it is required to be funded. Finally, management and precise observation are necessary to prevent harmful events.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
it is commonplace issue that many various ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, furthermore, hence, however, if, so, then, therefore, while, i think, in conclusion, in fact, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1523.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 289.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26989619377 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80202903663 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.581314878893 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 465.3 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.9031991966 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.785714286 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6428571429 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.2857142857 7.06120827912 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.226379230752 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0877760895861 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0569661221476 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151943508684 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.067498248087 0.056905535591 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.38 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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