Some countries achieve international sports by building specialised facilities to train top athletes, instead of providing sports facilities that everyone can use. Do you think this is positive or negative development?
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
It is agrue that some countries achieve international sports by building morden equipment to train the professional player, but on other aspect many people believe that government should provide sports facilities which everybody can use. In my opinion, both views have their benefits and drawbacks with each person and each situation. The following essay will analyse this statement in detail.
On the one hand, government can be concentrate to invest in specialised facilities to train top athletes who can contribute their ability for the nation, getting more achievement and become National pride. Furthermore, making the wonderful habit for athlete and professional players can train themselves to have the best mentality and physical health in the competetion. There are have a plenty of companies can teach and improve the youngs talent generation in many fields. To illustrate, in Vietnam we have PVF which is the biggest and most sucessfull football business ever. These business train the talent football player when they was youngs, so they have train a lot of football player who contribute their talent for the nation. On the nagative aspect, the huge Investments from government seem like invisible pressure for the athletes. this things will have bad affect their mentality and ability following that the score or achievement they get is not really satisfied.
On the other hand, providing sports facilities that everyone can use will help more individuals can appoarch to the new morden equipment. Improving their strongth, mentality and individual's life. Moreover, by sports facilities people can have enough energy to contribute for their country. The individuals is the main element to the country development, they need fair provide and support from government to promote their effort, motivation and energy. However, some specialised facilities will not appropriate to the amaterasu because of these complicated and it will lead the terrible influence for individual.
To conclude, by my reason and agruement from these essay both view have their own advantages and drawbacks appropriate with each person, so the state need to have bright plan to help their individuals's health better than before.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, however, if, moreover, really, so, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1876.0 1615.20841683 116% => OK
No of words: 345.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.43768115942 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3097767484 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80478781704 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.533333333333 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 574.2 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.8074331889 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.25 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5625 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.3125 7.06120827912 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.236669727384 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0789327483336 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.087567125488 0.0667982634062 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156616846403 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0951768091727 0.056905535591 167% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.27 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.16 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.