On of the most conspicous trends of today's world is a colossal upserge in the number of people believing that inb various nations, the problem of crime is incresing at alarming rate because youngsters have not any employment, while others resistit, they hold the opinionthat police can better treat with the criminal which are best way to decline the crime. Though, this essay favour in second view would discuss both sides in upcoming paragraphs.
To commence wih, there are deluge of arguments of favour in my stance. the most preponderant one is that government should be instoln CCTV camers, because human beings cannot work for 24 hour's. That's reason, thy do not observe proparly criminal activities, but if they use electronic gadgets, they will utilize vedio as a proof. Decresing the criminal activities cannot only contribute to sophisticating society, but also leads to numerous other benefits in various field needless to say, all these merits stand one is a good stead, as far as augmenting their chances of prosperity and exellence is concerned.
Furthermore, other pivotal aspect of the aforementioned propositions is that it is only likely to help one excel and thrive in varied areas.Besides, authorities should reduce to unemployment sector, because grat qunitity of henious which are done by new generation. Despite the fact that they do hard work, he cannot get jobs,as aresult they undergo depression, then after they prone to deliquent acts. since they have not work for doing in whole day. For intance, the study results published by th government in april 2014 and may 2016 decline crime is cruical and important concern for conversation. Hence, it is apparent why many are in favor of this points.
On the other hand, a section of society contradicts the above said view. They opine that if police play part and parcel role for reducing crime, individuals will fear from police because they do not want go imprisonment To exenplify this situation, people can see in society if folks commit crime, they will think regarding result before doing, because they cannor accept any shameful situation . Therefore, it is clear why some people are against of second view.
To conclude, having pondered over above stated, it is crystal clear that despite some drawbacks the benfits of the using of electronics gadgets for supervision are indeed to great to ignore.
- Some countries are struggling with an increase in the rate of crime Many people think that having more police on the streets is the only way to reduce crime To what extent do you agree 89
- Some countries are struggling with an increase in the rate of crime Many people think that having more police on the streets is the only way to reduce crime To what extent do you agree 89
- In some countries a few people earn extremely high salaries Some people think that this is good for a country while others believe that the government should control salaries and limit the amount people can earn Discuss both views and give your opinio 84
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, furthermore, hence, if, may, regarding, second, so, then, therefore, while, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2000.0 1615.20841683 124% => OK
No of words: 390.0 315.596192385 124% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12820512821 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44391917772 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70778413049 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 245.0 176.041082164 139% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.628205128205 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 621.9 506.74238477 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 2.10420841683 333% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 99.0507389619 49.4020404114 200% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 133.333333333 106.682146367 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.0 20.7667163134 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.53333333333 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.172038645804 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0470870887971 0.084324248473 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.051117835832 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0923043854214 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0533628406248 0.056905535591 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.77 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.42 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 111.0 78.4519038076 141% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.