one of the most conspicuous trends of today's world is a colossal upserge in a number of people believing that in few nationsmasses have been earned extremely high sallries which is good for a countries whille other rebute it. i agee with fist view and i would discuss both views in following paragraphs.
To commence, there are deluge arguments in favor of my stance. the most preponterant one is that high sallary is increasing the economy of their counteries if masses do job on high pay, they give taxes to government. moreover it is a various thingh depend on it like make building, health and road system. it cannot only contribute to economy of their counteies but also lead to numerous other benefits in various field thanks to wide range advantages it offers masses can enhnce the quality and productivity in their lives, with much ease efficacy and convience. needless to say all these merits stand ine is good stead, as far augmenting their chance of excellence and prosperity is concerned.
Furthermore, another pivotal aspect of aforementioned is that it is only likrly to help one excel and thrive in variod areas.Besides, it is developed high pay then thay think about other business which are helped to incrase employment. Although they do stand their personal business, they must be need of employers. So that it is vast their areas. For intance the study result published by governmentof australia in march 2014 and april 2015 clearly indcat that high salaries is good way for both countries and areas.
On th other hand som people contradict above said views. some people argue that it is change in violence. the rich individuals do not like to poor people. moreover they do work on low salaries. the rich people do ever the power of money. So it is not good for their becauese ir is increse the difference in people. Hence most of rich people do not want to work themeselves.
To conclude having pondered over above stated that it is crystel clear that in some controes which are few people have earned high salaries becauese it is good for country are indeed too great tp ignore.
- Some countries are struggling with an increase in the rate of crime Many people think that having more police on the streets is the only way to reduce crime To what extent do you agree 89
- In some countries a few people earn extremely high salaries Some people think that this is good for a country while others believe that the government should control salaries and limit the amount people can earn Discuss both views and give your opinio 84
- Some countries are struggling with an increase in the rate of crime Many people think that having more police on the streets is the only way to reduce crime To what extent do you agree 89
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, furthermore, hence, if, moreover, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 13.1623246493 175% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1749.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 363.0 315.596192385 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.81818181818 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3649236973 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64704033696 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 176.041082164 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.575757575758 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 541.8 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 72.5788519522 49.4020404114 147% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.0526315789 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1052631579 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.26315789474 7.06120827912 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 5.01903807615 339% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.304507262351 0.244688304435 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0779309740203 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0854163173824 0.0667982634062 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.174982898604 0.151304729494 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0913971465022 0.056905535591 161% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.36 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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