In some countries, a few people earn extremely high salaries. Some people think that this is good for a country, while others believe that the government should control salaries and limit the amount people can earn.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Nowadays, everybody gets another to another salary. It has contact with the skill and knowledge of people. Also, some country has a system high salary. But some people earn totally a lot of salaries and other people opposite them. Some people think that this is good for a good country, while others believe that the government should control salaries and limit the amount people can earn.
Absolutely, the government should influence the low amount of salary and but salary's maximum is that wrong problem. For instance, my country has less salary. The government has been rising last few years and unfortunately, it following the popular product's cost are increasing rapidly. Moreover, recently social insurance has been increasing every year. It is affecting deeply the population.
Some country's human prefers to work in a country with a high salary of foreign. My country's people too. About the last 20 years, many younger guys and ladies went to Korea, Japan, and another country. They wanted to get a higher salary than Mongolia and they could.
In my opinion, If my country does not make to bigger work in salary and tax, most people would go abroad. Everybody wishes to get a high salary and live plentifully. Therefore, due to humans do not work abroad, the government should increase salary and improve the environment of life. Me too, I would stop that think to work abroad. Also, too many Mongolian guys would back arrive and live happily.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, therefore, while, for instance, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 41.998997996 48% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1217.0 1615.20841683 75% => OK
No of words: 244.0 315.596192385 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98770491803 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95227774224 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46789040864 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.565573770492 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 378.0 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 20.2975951904 59% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.8120398188 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 64.0526315789 106.682146367 60% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.8421052632 20.7667163134 62% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.89473684211 7.06120827912 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 12.0 3.4128256513 352% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.361338540795 0.244688304435 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101409651623 0.084324248473 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.168655010863 0.0667982634062 252% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.219320756147 0.151304729494 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.200422135563 0.056905535591 352% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 13.0946893788 65% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.76 50.2224549098 135% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 11.3001002004 60% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.77 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.92 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.1190380762 67% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.7795591182 65% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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