In some countries the average weight of people is increasing and their levels of health and fitness are decreasing.What do you think are the causes of these problems and what measures could be taken to solve them?

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In some countries the average weight of people is increasing and their levels of health and fitness are decreasing.
What do you think are the causes of these problems and what measures could be taken to solve them?

There is an argument over a continuing growing in the mean weight of people and a falling in their fitness in some societies. This essay discusses about probable reasons along with some solutions for this problem.

There is this belief that overweight is a type of disease which unfortunately is rising especially in developed countries. It seems to me that several reasons can cause this disorder. Firstly, Unhealthy food such as junk food which not only is one of the main factors for obesity, but also its effect will be strengthened if people do not have enough physical exercise. Secondly, some type of jobs which person sits a lot with no moving for a long time. A clear example is clerks who work with either computer or cell phone with neither moving nor activity. Thirdly, fatty food such as pizza which is used more in modern world these days. So, If the world health organization (WHO) do not take care of this issue, it can be had harmful effects for each country.

On the other hand, each group can solve this problem just with wise measures. As far as my view, if healthy food has been in the place of junk food, we can see a significant decrease in the rate of fat people. Moreover, regular exercise such as aerobic and anaerobic would be useful particularly in some special job. In my opinion, a healthy diet which includes wide range of nutritious with periodical movements is helpful.

In conclusion, I am convinced that people in each institute cannot help to having healthy society unless they collaborate with each other in solving this disorder with both suitable diet and fitness.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, third, thirdly, in conclusion, in fact, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1342.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.81003584229 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52928277598 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.634408602151 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 414.9 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.9213068103 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.8571428571 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9285714286 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.7142857143 7.06120827912 152% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.117635716704 0.244688304435 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0421600447277 0.084324248473 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0404020592019 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0769986342132 0.151304729494 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.040587431649 0.056905535591 71% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.37 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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