In some countries the average weight of people is increasing and their levels of health and fitness are decreasing. What do you think are the causes of these problems and what measures could be taken to solve them?
It is common that in some countries, many people have become overweight and their health conditions are also declining. Personally, I think that the main reason for these issues is the unhealthy lifestyle and it is possible for individuals to deal with these problems.
Firstly, harmful eating diet is one of the main culprits of these problems. It is proved that fast-foods and soft drinks are the major factors in a harmful diet, which contains many unhealthy fat acids leading to the overweight of humans’ body. These days, people are easily addicted to junk foods and convenience stores are everywhere so they usually attracted humans’ attention. Secondly, sedentary lifestyle are becoming more common with many people. This is because the technology, today, is developing very rapidly fast, making lots of people especially teenagers addicted to video games and smartphones. For example, in many families, these days, children are impressed by the lively and colorful images of video games and smart phones. Clearly, they prefer spending whole day with those modern facilities gadgets to doing sports of physical activities hanging out with friends. After a long time, the consequence of such passive lifestyle is getting out of shape and a considerable decrease in their health levels.
However, these problems can still be tackled if some measures are taken instantly and seriously. Firstly, governments should notify individuals about the negative impacts of those harmful foods on humans’ life. With better understanding of deleterious effects of those foods, people will be aware of balancing their diets. Besides, companies and local communities need to promote healthy habits and build more gyms with more modern sport facilities to increase the number of people doing exercise. Take an example in Vietnam, many offices have bought sport facilities to encourage their staffs to exercise every morning before starting their work. The result is that the fitness of their members and the work efficiency have gone up significantly. Obviously, this is the key for these problems.
In conclusion, unhealthy diets and the sedentary lifestyle are mainly responsible for the obesity and the decline in humans’ health. However, there are some solutions for these issues.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, still, for example, i think, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1949.0 1615.20841683 121% => OK
No of words: 356.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.47471910112 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34372677135 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76795164445 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.573033707865 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 609.3 506.74238477 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.8286441574 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.578947368 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7368421053 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.68421052632 7.06120827912 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.170216555039 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0539704149489 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0477368263043 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110863960326 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0466430155903 0.056905535591 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.45 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.14 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 78.4519038076 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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