In some countries, the difference in age between parents and children is generally greater than it was in the past. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
In some parts of the world, the trend towards people having babies at an older age is increasingly prevalent, which accordingly contributes to the age gap between parents and children. In my opinion, while it is beneficial for a better life among children, the drawback, including the reduced connection between parents and children, is more significant.
In terms of better lives among children, the age gap between parents and children has a positive impact on that because parents are more well-prepared for a decent financial condition. After years of hard work, parents could earn more money and invest in different necessities such as toys, milk, and clothes, all of which lays the foundation for the early growth of children. In contrast, if parents have babies at an early age, they may not provide sufficient necessary items for their children due to the shortage of money.
Apart from the benefit expressed above, I believe that the age gap between the two generations would pose a problem to the shared interaction because they have different views on many issues. These issues including study, work, and lifestyle would lead to conflicts if family members could not reach an agreement. For example, children would evaluate their future career based on personal preferences, while parents tend to give priority to realistic factors such as financial and job stability. However, when this gap is not remarkable, they would have some sympathy with each other.
In conclusion, people nowadays tend to give birth at an older age compared to their counterparts did in perhaps 30 years ago. Although the main benefit of this trend is to ensure that their children would experience a higher standard of living, the reduced interaction between parents and children, however, could be even more damaging.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...and children, is more significant. In terms of better lives among children, t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, but, however, if, may, so, well, while, apart from, as to, for example, in conclusion, in contrast, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1532.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 293.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22866894198 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7030371977 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.549488054608 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 463.5 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 35.7364087324 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 139.272727273 106.682146367 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.6363636364 20.7667163134 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.2727272727 7.06120827912 174% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.198939486173 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0844413668314 0.084324248473 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0525192296089 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137164192278 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0485572432636 0.056905535591 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 13.0946893788 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.35 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.02 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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