Some countries have an ever-increasing proportion of the population who are aged 15 and younger. what is your opinion of the current and future effects it may have in those countries?
The right proportion of the population of all age group is an important aspect of the social, economic and overall growth of a country. It is true that the number of the younger population has increased significant that has a detrimental effect on the society, workforce and the country. From my perspective, I believe this is overall a negative trend despite one single benefit it may bring about.
There is no doubt that this tendency has a positive effect on the economic factor and job facilities of a country. If the country has great economic stability and can create plenty of job opportunities in the future, the under-aged population now would become the de facto to the economy in the future and that would enable the country to develop rapidly. The country will have a huge number of worker and professionals in the future and they would be able to increase the GDP of this country. They can support their community, become better members of the society through positive competition and can contribute to the family by sharing the workload.
Regardless of the advantage mentioned above, I believe this is a negative trend. Firstly, increasing competition in school is obvious. Since the younger generation is mostly school goer, the parent would have to suffer to get their children admitted to a good school. Many poor parents would have forced to send their children to work and earn and this will increase child labor in many developing and undeveloped countries. The disproportion of population age distribution in such countries will lead them to the scarcity of skilled labor and other professional. Since those children are not earning members, that would negatively affect the overall economy of the country. On the other hand, if the country fails to ensure jobs and business opportunity when those children will become adults, the outcome would be catastrophic. The unemployment and crime rate would surely increase and that would negatively affect society.
In conclusion, all the existing reasons provide a concrete foundation that the proclivity of young age population may result in a wide range of adverse effects, and thus, is a negative issue in today’s society.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 175, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'schooled'.
Suggestion: schooled
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, may, so, thus, in conclusion, no doubt, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 7.85571142285 229% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1844.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 361.0 315.596192385 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.108033241 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35889894354 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8308650095 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.498614958449 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 588.6 506.74238477 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.7290017075 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.25 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5625 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.875 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.229458958782 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.071966804906 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0523000254847 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129982960421 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0382503912452 0.056905535591 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.53 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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