In some countries an increasing number of people are suffering from health problems as a result of eating too much fast food. It is therefore necessary for governments to impose a higher tax on this kind of food. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
upsurge number of people are ding regarding consuming too much fast food, in many countries; thus. it is significant for the authorities to impose a higher tax on this type of nutrition. I am a strong advocate of this approach for some reasons.
First of all, forcing these places which offer fast food for paying extra tax will lead them to make their products more expensive in a way that could be harder for the consumer to buy. that happens because the money that will be given to the authorities would force the owner of these shops to make higher; therefore, they will lose huge categories of people who came to buy that food. For example, the employment category which pays a lot of food while there are working will not pay these kinds of food. As a result, some people may be really away from buying these kinds of food. if the government helped their dwellers to reduce the amount of eating out home, the government and the citizen might gain a lot of values such as reducing the ailments.
Furthermore, that will restrict spreading these places. that is because these place that offers that kind of food will compete with each other in a way that could be hard to survive. As a result, it could be hard for some people to reach these places. they, moreover, could save much money and save their health. if the government helps their citizen to reduce these places, their citizen could act better at work such as employees who work earlier they could need much power to do their job efficiently.
By the way of conclusion, it seems to me that the government has to force fast food places to pay much tax in order to restrict the upsurge of this place.
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- Some people say that what children watch on TV influences their behavior while others say the amount of time children they spend watching TV influences their behavior. Discuss both views and give your opinion 61
- In some countries an increasing number of people are suffering from health problems as a result of eating too much fast food. It is therefore necessary for governments to impose a higher tax on this kind of food. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 56
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, if, may, moreover, really, regarding, so, therefore, thus, well, while, as to, for example, kind of, such as, as a result, by the way, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1400.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 301.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.6511627907 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.30355012906 2.80592935109 82% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.511627906977 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 411.3 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.5332763506 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.0 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.9285714286 7.06120827912 169% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.272424542006 0.244688304435 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109666892987 0.084324248473 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0620446746058 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.190127972171 0.151304729494 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0696577195303 0.056905535591 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 50.2224549098 134% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.69 12.4159519038 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.14 8.58950901804 83% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 78.4519038076 60% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.