Some people say that what children watch on TV influences their behavior while others say the amount of time children they spend watching TV influences their behavior. Discuss both views and give your opinion
it is noticeable that purchasing stuff online, such as books, air tickets, and groceries is becoming well-known. While there are still drawbacks of browsing stuff online, I believe its values are more significant.
Admittedly, there are some basic downsides of browsing stuff online. firstly, some may claim that things are not tangible. that happens because there are no real places to check their stuff; in addition, they could not check their needs precisely. The quality of a book, for example, that is chosen might be the same as people saw online. secondly, there are many fake websites that are not reliable for some. that happens due to the manipulating that some places do with some client; however, that is very noticeable to be understood. consequently, some clients could not go for online shopping.
Nevertheless, I suppose the benefits of online shopping would eclipse those analyzed disadvantages. initially, online shopping can help customers to save their time and energy. that is because clients could google what they really want to buy such as a book or even buying things from supermarkets, and the things which they ordered will be delivered to them. If customers could not go for this option, they will waste much time and effort. finally, browsing online would help clients to have a variety of options about what they want to buy. that is due to many websites have recently been opened; moreover, they could see many categories at the same time. As a result, clients would feel thankful for what they bought.
To conclude, I am of the opinion that buying things online, regarding its benefits are more notable than any of the minor problems it might cause.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, finally, first, firstly, however, if, may, moreover, nevertheless, really, regarding, second, secondly, so, still, well, while, for example, i suppose, in addition, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 23.0 41.998997996 55% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1428.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08185053381 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57058755263 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.540925266904 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 430.2 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 5.43587174349 239% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.0339031046 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.0 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5294117647 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.7058823529 7.06120827912 166% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.111238071819 0.244688304435 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0374202473203 0.084324248473 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0237894214218 0.0667982634062 36% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0548354468673 0.151304729494 36% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0378429599181 0.056905535591 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.8 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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