In some countries, many more people are choosing to live alone nowadays than in the past. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?
In recent years, people in which most young generation who have tend to live alone, particular ly in large cities in the developed world. In my opinion, this tend could have both positive and negative consequences in equal measure.
The rise in one-person households can be seen as positive both personal and broader economic reasons. From my point of view, people who choose to live alone may become more independent and seft-reliant than those who live with relatives.In addition, A young adult who live alone will be required some necessary skills for example learn to cook, clean, pay bills, manage their budget, all of which are valuable life skills. From an economic perpective, people live alone is result in significant demand in housing. It is likely to benifit for the construction industry, host of the companies that depend on homeowners to buy their products.
However, the personal and economic arguments given above can be considered from the opposite angle. Firstly, people who live alone may experience feelings of homeless, isolation, worry. They miss out daily conservation that family can provide, and they have to bear the weight of household bills. Perhaps the tend towards living alone is a negative one. Secondly, one of the most important thing that a young adult need to consider to make great decison is ficancial, with the rapid development of businesses and population, this can lead to rise in demand in housing. People who live alone will be tackled some problems include poverty prices and rents.
In conclusion, the increase in one-person households will have both beneficial and detrimental effects on individuals and on the economy.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 65, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'tended'.
Suggestion: tended
...in which most young generation who have tend to live alone, particular ly in large c...
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Line 3, column 238, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: In
...iant than those who live with relatives.In addition, A young adult who live alone ...
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Line 5, column 306, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
... the weight of household bills. Perhaps the tend towards living alone is a negative one....
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, for example, in addition, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1412.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21033210332 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72028559242 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.579335793358 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 453.6 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.7169238574 49.4020404114 135% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.615384615 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8461538462 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.46153846154 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.225141906249 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0787842452258 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0650909989257 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121211830343 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.07160610864 0.056905535591 126% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.94 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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