In some countries, many more people are choosing to live alone nowadays than in the past. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?
Topic is believed to be one of the most common issue in today's contemporary life. This is a widely-held claim that the vast majority of people prefer to reside lone these days than in the past. In my opinion, there are both positive and negative development. This essay will discuss both the advantages and disadvantages of living lone.
Undoubtedly, up-to-date humans desire to live alone than people of the past. The first thing interacted people, who are choosing to reside alone, is technology. The sooner, technology develop, the more life becomes comfortable to live. Today, if you try hard to achieve something, you can do it without helping by yourself. This is proof of positive development. Furthermore, being alone, becomes to be an independent. Independent people can solve their problems by themselves, as well as, they have enough skill, qualification and experience to do something, also, may have their personal success their independent life. Therefore, being independent might be positive development.
On the other hand, we know from ancient history that people used to live as a tribe. Their life was good with their together. They helped each other as much as possible when they needed help. I think that there are some disadvantages of living alone. In spite of the fact that people have enough skills, knowledge or life experience, however, all people are needy help. In addition to, they may feel alone, boring or sad themselves, and it entails to become stress or failure. Furthermore, living alone is complicated, because, you might miss your relatives. Absolutely, they are negative development. Moreover, each person are needy to help their parents and friends.
Taking all the above into account it may be concluded that as I have convinced there are both positive and negative development of choosing to reside alone. In my opinion, it just depends on each person.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, however, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, well, i think, in addition, as well as, in my opinion, in spite of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1595.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 309.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.16181229773 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1926597562 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84287951749 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.553398058252 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 517.5 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 5.43587174349 239% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 16.0721442886 143% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.3624256528 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 69.347826087 106.682146367 65% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.4347826087 20.7667163134 65% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.69565217391 7.06120827912 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.9879759519 276% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.280235611833 0.244688304435 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0765869208199 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0680491594142 0.0667982634062 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159567700543 0.151304729494 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0446855808107 0.056905535591 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 13.0946893788 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 49.82 50.2224549098 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.06 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.96 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.