In some countries, more and more adults continue to live with their parents even after they have completed education and found jobs. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
It is indisputable that there has been a surge in the number of young people who continue to reside with their parents, even after graduating from university and landing jobs, in some parts of the world. While there are certain advantages to this trend, I firmly believe that its disadvantages outweigh any benefits.
On the one hand, staying with parents allows young adults to have an easier start to the multifaceted adult life, especially for those who are just starting out in their careers. Firstly, living at home enables young people to save money and establish a solid financial foundation, as they can split the cost of living with their parents. Additionally, living with family can provide a source of emotional support, which can be valuable during challenging times. For example, when they are sick or in a sad mood, parents can be a valuable source to take care of them, listen to their concerns, and give guidance.
On the other hand, I contend that the drawbacks of continuing to live with parents outweigh any benefits. Living with parents can lead to conflicts and tensions, particularly if there are differences in opinions or lifestyles. Parents may hold rigid religious or cultural beliefs that their children do not agree with, which can lead to disagreements and resentment. Furthermore, living with parents may mean that personal boundaries are not respected. Children may feel as though they have no privacy, while parents can think that they have no control over their children's conduct.
In conclusion, despite such apparent benefits, the practice of continuing to live with parents, when finishing education and finding employment, causes more drawbacks.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, if, may, so, while, for example, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1422.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20879120879 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76439098754 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.59706959707 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 427.5 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.1700127793 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.5 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.75 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.83333333333 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.357369746682 0.244688304435 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.121409446044 0.084324248473 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0367302822651 0.0667982634062 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.192689130214 0.151304729494 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0272508354537 0.056905535591 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.07 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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