In some countries, more and more adults continue to live with there parents even after the have completed education and found jobs. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
We live in an age when many of us carry on living with our parents when we have already accomplished school or even had decent jobs. The following essay takes a look of both sides of the argument. However, I’m of the opinion that the benefits of living alone absolutely surpass the remaining one.
On the one hand, living with parents is possessed with a plethora of merits. To start with, all members of the family can support each other in all aspect. By sharing house work, the amount of choire each people have to do at home will decreass, which result in the increase of leisure time they will have to do their desirable activites. In addition, parents are all the seniors of life, thus when the juveniles have any difficuties or any complicated problem, it’s possible for them to consult their parents’s advices. Another point worth noting is that being under the same roof with parents, the youngsters will have chances to discuss with the other generation. As a result, they will have the ability to communicate with the people in wide-range of age in society.
Conversely, it is also burdened by a gamut of weakness and downside. The fact that, dependence is another indisputable reality that will lead to difficulties in the future due to lack of self-reliant skills. They get used to rely on their parents and can not puzzle out hard trouble by their own. Another factor to consider is that it is indispensable to have conflict with each other caused by generation gap. The young inclines different tendency, thought, interest which parents may not find appropriate.
In the final analysis, the argument has both dominances and hindrance. Nevertheless, from my point of view, I belive that the disadvantages outnumer the profits.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 298, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'used to relying'.
Suggestion: used to relying
...o lack of self-reliant skills. They get used to rely on their parents and can not puzzle out...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, conversely, however, if, look, may, nevertheless, so, thus, in addition, as a result, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1455.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 297.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89898989899 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71492820818 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.59595959596 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 458.1 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.2575495705 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.9375 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5625 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5625 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.181310631428 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0520551514061 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0461439306767 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0925639533837 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0519540319219 0.056905535591 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.14 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.68 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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