In this day and age, an increasing number of contemparories are paying attention to whether it is more beneficial for people to build a house or to hire one. There are some reasons that lie beneath the issue and this essay aims to discuss them. To my prospective, this trend is positive due to benefits which have been to human life.
In terms of the main reasons behind the idea of having a home, comfort and comfort are considered the most influential factors. People believe that when they have a permanent house, they can feel secure to do business and stabilize their life. Moreover, nowadays, rental fees are quite expensive, people often spend a huge amount of money to pay monthly. Instead of renting a home with high cost, people can focus on making money and buying a home that fits their budget. Although it may be small, they are very comfortable and don't have to worry about rent.
I strongly support the notion that buying a home is a positive move at the moment. The attitude of wanting to get home debt is sure to be a powerful motivator for young people working to achieve their goals in the long run. Furthermore, having freedoms is of paramount importance in this trend. In contrast to rental homes where people are not allowed to make changes, in their own homes, they have the absolute right to renovate or arrange whatever they want. In addition, building a happy and lasting family rather than moving away often could be the preeminent privileges for those who choose to stick for the long term.
From these above mentioned reasons, the conclusion can be drawn that although there are some disadvantageous elements, I still bebielve that the positive side do out-shadow the negative ones. Having own homes is more likely to be the first choice compared to rental housings.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, if, may, moreover, so, still, in addition, in contrast, in contrast to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1502.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 313.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.79872204473 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20616286096 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53478087153 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.594249201278 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 476.1 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.0933357961 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.133333333 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8666666667 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06120827912 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.266651060892 0.244688304435 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.080544399409 0.084324248473 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0315072936192 0.0667982634062 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150411372637 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0223954554768 0.056905535591 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.56 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.06 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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