In today’s economic turmoil that human beings have to face and tolerate, having security in life is a paramount issue among them. It is worth noting that owning a house can be considered a way for achieving this feel (security).
First of all, people are working in a competitive labour market, and staying longer hours in their workplaces to have better living conditions. Therefore, they try to contribute amounts of money to their saving accounts in order to purchase a house for themselves. In increases their self-confidence, letting them believe that they have not waste their times by tolerating burden of responsibilities in their career life. It means that they become motivated considerably when they afford to buy a house because owning tangible commodities increase self-esteem.
Turning to possible drawbacks, having short distance from a company worked for is compulsory, and owing a house may cause lack of flexibility. Therefore, they may find a job far from their own houses, and travel long distances, causing boredom, followed by deficiency in their career.
On the side of advantages, the most important point is that house owners can change interior and exterior design of their houses based on their interests, making satisfaction and peace for them, and it can increase their efficiency in all aspects of their life noticeably. The second point is that people are always worried about their offspring’s future, then owing a house is an investment for their children which can secure their life financially.
To conclude, people need to increase their motivation and suppress their frustrations, and owning a house can help them to be content to some extent, and it seems to me that its advantages outweigh the disadvantages.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, may, second, so, then, therefore, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 24.0651302605 166% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1486.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 282.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.2695035461 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95333659995 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.59219858156 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 454.5 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 6.0 0.809619238477 741% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 46.7431879511 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.090909091 106.682146367 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.6363636364 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.63636363636 7.06120827912 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0722941707738 0.244688304435 30% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0357398713419 0.084324248473 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0297098267959 0.0667982634062 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0507392594188 0.151304729494 34% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0216743990924 0.056905535591 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.41 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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