It is seen that in some countries people prefer to own the home rather than rent a place in comparison to other countries. this scenario, somehow bringing positive situation in many countries.
The biggest question that raised here is what causing necessity of renting house by every passing day? The core answer is 'migration'. More and more people leaning towards cities for surviving rather than villages. Other reasons international immigration. People going abroad for work and higher studies. This trend being more famous in students.
Accommodation is very costly specially in big cities. During the initial stage of migration, People choose to rent a house. Although, These rented house are just temporary shelter for them. Truth is how much money people spend on rent they can never own the place. this is the biggest reason people want their own home. Second reason is landlord. Some landlord put many restriction on their rentaler. often these restriction are unnecessary make rentaler feel suffocating. This situation also lead them to buy a house. As they get stable job they prefer to buy house.
In some countries this scenario is higher than other nations. In many countries, people do not follow rules of law very strictly and sometimes landlord tell their rentaler to move without any further notice. In this scenario rentaler need to move to the first place they find or they might have to spend their days on street or in hotels. This is the core reason why owning place is important in some countries.
Nowadays, there are many banks which provide housing loan with lower rate of interest. In these days getting a loan has became easier then ever. There are many finance companies which provide loan with less hesitant and less paper work with little higher rate of interest. This facility also a reason for people to buy home.
Overall, this new trend of buying permanent home hase became positive option for people who spend their days by moving from one to another place.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: This
...place in comparison to other countries. this scenario, somehow bringing positive sit...
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...d on rent they can never own the place. this is the biggest reason people want their...
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Suggestion: Often
...put many restriction on their rentaler. often these restriction are unnecessary make ...
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Line 5, column 520, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ituation also lead them to buy a house. As they get stable job they prefer to buy...
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...buy a house. As they get stable job they prefer to buy house. In some countrie...
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Line 7, column 209, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ler to move without any further notice. In this scenario rentaler need to move to ...
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Suggestion: become
...erest. In these days getting a loan has became easier then ever. There are many financ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, second, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1691.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 334.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0628742515 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27500489853 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37522538943 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.544910179641 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 513.9 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 16.0721442886 168% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 20.2975951904 59% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.5369501195 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 62.6296296296 106.682146367 59% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 12.3703703704 20.7667163134 60% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 1.07407407407 7.06120827912 15% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 14.0 3.4128256513 410% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.301520445785 0.244688304435 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0763448599277 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0682623861788 0.0667982634062 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162283197442 0.151304729494 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0647867351522 0.056905535591 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 13.0946893788 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.76 50.2224549098 135% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 11.3001002004 60% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.18 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.54 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 4.5 9.78957915832 46% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.1190380762 67% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.7795591182 65% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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