There are some culture where kids are told that they can gain success if they work hard. Although, Some believe that encouragement like this have disadvantages over advantages. In further paragraphs I would elaborates light on both sides.
We must encourage our children to pursue their dreams and they always need a push to work harder. The best way to encourage anyone is give them confidence by saying that they are able to do anything they want in their lives. Consequently, it is often come to light that are number of culture where folk motivate their kids by saying they can achieve anything if they work hard enough. In these cultures they merely do not uplift children achieve anything by watching dreams but they teach importance of working hard. Even psychology support the statement that the praise and mental support is best method to improve person's skill either they children or employee of any company.
There is a research done to support this idea. According to a research made on children, there are more chances of children to work hard instead of children who do not get advice of working hard.
There is only one disadvantage of this situation when a child do not get succeed after putting all efforts, it breaks his heart and lead to depression. Sometimes a person try to pursue a dream for that they do not meant to or do not have talent what it takes. I really believe in this time parents need to be little harsh and must tell the truth to their children. Though, As it is said "you can not learn to walk without failing".
There are more advantage of encourage children for work hard rather than disadvantage which is very neglectable.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Message: “Although” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
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Message: The verb 'would' requires the base form of the verb: 'elaborate'
Suggestion: elaborate
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Suggestion: is the best
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, if, really, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1392.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.78350515464 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55968307045 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.549828178694 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 427.5 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.3155293643 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.8 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.2 7.06120827912 31% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.482558748818 0.244688304435 197% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.145371297268 0.084324248473 172% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.103259255706 0.0667982634062 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.234070843676 0.151304729494 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0853091970784 0.056905535591 150% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.44 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.35 8.58950901804 86% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 78.4519038076 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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