In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people. Why might this be the case? Do you think this is a positive or negative situation?
A plethora of individuals in several countries advocates the significance of possessing accommodation of their own instead of being a tenant. The driving factor behind this tendency is our search for a sense of belonging. And I do think that this situation varies from person to person.
At first, being in possession of a home of their own is the ultimate dream of many people in almost every country. At the same time, a house is a place that makes us feel safe and it is also a great asset. For example, in my country, middle class or working class people toil for their entire life just to save up enough money to buy an abode for themselves since it will provide them with a sense of security. Along with that, they also view this as a potential investment for their future. Hence, in my opinion, individuals who do so have these as reasons behind their decision and I do not think there is anything wrong with it.
On the other hand, there are quite a lot of number of citizens prefer renting an apartment or a house rather than purchasing one simply because it is an extremely expensive investment. Furthermore, it is really inconvenient for moving to other places. To illustrate, in our country a government service holder has to transfer to many cities because of his job and it is not possible to own accommodation in every town he is transferred to. Consequently, the most viable option for him is to become a tenant. Therefore, for several people it is better to rent than owning a home.
To conclude, I would say that, whether someone buys or rents a house it depends on the motivation behind him and this purpose is different for every individual.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, first, furthermore, hence, if, really, so, therefore, as to, for example, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1374.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 297.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.62626262626 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73772780892 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.575757575758 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 447.3 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.9412913602 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.1428571429 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2142857143 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.282808300345 0.244688304435 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0931962362607 0.084324248473 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0627861449293 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162589513474 0.151304729494 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0459636577447 0.056905535591 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.57 12.4159519038 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.92 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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