In some countries, people are having children at later age in life. What are the reasons? Do the advantage outweigh disadvantages?
In recent years, many people have inclination to give birth at an older age in their life. From my point of view, this results from various reasons which will be elaborated on in this essay and the advantages should be considered more than the drawbacks.
To commence with, the tendency to have offspring lately comes from two main rationales. First and foremost, in the context of the developed world, since the young generation primarily focuses on tertiary education and establishing a firm career path for themselves, they have less time for love and marriage. For instance, Japan is the country facing with old population matter because of the fact that adults do not have much time for their marriage plan apart from working and education to have a better life standard. The second reason worth mentioning is that the mindset about getting married and raising children of the young generation nowadays has changed. To be more specific, many people, especially those who live in urban areas and are exposed to advanced knowledge, understand that a child needs to live in the best environment both physically and educationally. In the meanwhile, in order to do that, it requires a lot of money and effort from young parents. Therefore, many young people feel that they still do not have enough ability to raise a child effectively and they just decide to have babies as soon as they prepare well both mentally and financially.
Related to the consequences of this phenomenon, I suppose that there are more advantages than disadvantages. Firstly, it brings to the betterment of life standard for children if they are born in families where parents are mature and have enough money as well as knowledge. Indeed, in some rural areas, many young women even teenagers are pregnant and cannot rear a child which results in the fact that more children suffer diseases and cannot access compulsory education. Secondly, having a baby lately creates opportunities for adults to focus on their careers. During youth, it is the best time for people to learn new things, broaden their knowledge, and achieve goals in careers. In contrast, if they get married and have babies earlier, they have to assume a full burden for their families and it is quite difficult to balance between life and work.
In conclusion, there are many reasons why people in some countries do not put the top priority on having children at an early age in their life and I think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 378, Rule ID: BECAUSE_OF_THE_FACT_THAT[1]
Message: This phrase is redundant. Use simply 'because'.
Suggestion: because
...untry facing with old population matter because of the fact that adults do not have much time for their ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, well, while, apart from, for instance, i suppose, i think, in conclusion, in contrast, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2072.0 1615.20841683 128% => OK
No of words: 419.0 315.596192385 133% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94510739857 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52432199235 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66641484297 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 221.0 176.041082164 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.527446300716 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 654.3 506.74238477 129% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 12.0 4.76152304609 252% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 47.8901330521 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.5 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.1875 20.7667163134 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.8125 7.06120827912 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.285967304258 0.244688304435 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0953903170469 0.084324248473 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.112310664042 0.0667982634062 168% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.23437512369 0.151304729494 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.146886018403 0.056905535591 258% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.73 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.66 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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