In some countries, small town-centre shops are going out of business because people tend to drive to large out-of-town stores. As a result, people without cars have limited access to out-of-town stores, and it may result in an increase in the use of cars. Do you think the disadvantages of this change outweigh its advantages?
In many nations, there has been a trend of shopping in big out-of-town stores, which is problematic for small town-center shops and leads to the escalation in car-usages when people who do not possess these vehicles may find it challenging to gain the access to those large shops. In my opinion, I suppose that this phenomenon brings more pros than cons because of the reasons that are going to be mentioned in this essay
On the one hand, moving to stores that are outside the city can help alleviate the traffic congestion in the center as well as offer consumers more choices. When many shops are erected inside a city, they would be flocked by loads of people, consequently causing traffic jams, which directly deteriorates the atmosphere. Meanwhile, the bigger shops sell more products, thus, this would not only benefit shoppers by giving them a wider range of options but also the whole economy by the revenue these stores make
On the other hand, it is obviously more inconvenient and immobile to travel long distances to only purchase a few items, especially for non-car-owners. In some circumstances, people do not go shopping with long lists of goods, in fact, some of them are just looking for only a couple of things that they have just run out of. As a result, it can be a big nuisance for these people to transport through hundreds of miles just to buy a few products. In addition, people have to go to stores for their essential goods, therefore, with only shops opened outside the center, there would bring a myriad of shortcomings for those who do not own a car
To conclude, although both positivity and negativity can be found in the favoritism of suburb shops. I strongly believe that its advantages can absolutely out shadow the drawbacks as it helps ease the traffic congestion in the city center and also develops the national economy
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 241, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'gaining'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'challenge' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: gaining
... these vehicles may find it challenging to gain the access to those large shops. In my ...
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Line 2, column 375, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e bigger shops sell more products, thus, this would not only benefit shoppers by ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, look, may, so, therefore, thus, well, while, i suppose, in addition, in fact, as a result, as well as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1544.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 322.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.7950310559 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23607819155 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68424325237 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.555900621118 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 482.4 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 40.0 20.2975951904 197% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 76.7512214887 49.4020404114 155% => OK
Chars per sentence: 193.0 106.682146367 181% => OK
Words per sentence: 40.25 20.7667163134 194% => OK
Discourse Markers: 20.0 7.06120827912 283% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.254253459627 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103540272613 0.084324248473 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0851875413383 0.0667982634062 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13643838601 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0943793412957 0.056905535591 166% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.3 13.0946893788 163% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.34 50.2224549098 78% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.7 11.3001002004 157% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.45 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.35 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 27.5 9.78957915832 281% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 18.0 10.1190380762 178% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 10.7795591182 167% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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