Some people think the increasing business and cultural contact between countries brings many positive effects. Others say it causes the loss of national identities. Discuss both view and give your opinion.
.The era of globalization has made nations around to globe to become interdependent in terms of politics, education, medicine especially international trade and culture exchange. Many regard that the rise in economic and traditional diversity of one nation possess beneficial impacts upon others. However, some object to this idea because of the visible possibility that indigenous values may be perished.
To begin with, numerous developing countries have been experiencing a rise in employment opportunity and a massive economic gains with regard to globalisation. The modern business has now found its capability to approach customers of oversea countries. To clearly explain this, companies possess a greater chance to have their products increased in sales numbers and to modify their items to become more approachable and more versatile. Furthermore, the cultural relationships among countries allow employees to go abroad and learn more new things about their neighbours. For example, the Americans usually take trips to Vietnam to experience a wide variety of exclusive foods and learn about the history of their past rival. These people exploit this prospect to improve their foreign foods’ quality, especially Pho and to enhance USA’s historical educational quality.
However wonderful the advantages may be, foreign policies may terminate a country’s exclusiveness. Globalization has provided a more diverse world in terms of culture’s quantity. One culture may become dominating and make others disappear. Once the culture of a region completely vanishes, it will reverse the merits which globalization evokes. For instance, if Vietnam’s indigenous food like Pho disappears, the amount of international tourists will disappear. Therefore, the tourism industry in Vietnam will fall into chaos and thereby downgrading the whole economic system.
In conclusion, though globalisation may benefit countries in terms of the economy, those countries, neglecting its policies about such progress might one day disappear completely off the world map. From my own experience, it is up to every individual’s awareness to not only keeps their identity but also encourages national growth
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, may, so, therefore, for example, for instance, in conclusion, to begin with, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1884.0 1615.20841683 117% => OK
No of words: 325.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.79692307692 5.12529762239 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24591054749 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.12866646451 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 212.0 176.041082164 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.652307692308 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 603.9 506.74238477 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.60771543086 118% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.4796952576 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.823529412 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1176470588 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.52941176471 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.103939576878 0.244688304435 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.031974118379 0.084324248473 38% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0211742290152 0.0667982634062 32% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0607601073903 0.151304729494 40% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0118732583436 0.056905535591 21% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 26.81 50.2224549098 53% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.36 12.4159519038 132% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.36 8.58950901804 121% => OK
difficult_words: 119.0 78.4519038076 152% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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