In some countries with widespread use if internet, people are able to work or study from home, instead of having to travel to work or college. Do the advantage of this outweigh the disadvantages? Discuss and state your own opinion.

It is undoubtedly true that modern innovations and inventions have provided the undeniable convenience to everyone, Internet is entering into the DNA of our daily routine.However it doesn't necessarily mean that everyone is always in the interest of using it all the time. I certainly do not agree with the above statement which i will explain in this essay.

In the first place, it is indubitable that contemporary technology, especially the globe of internet has provided us many opportunities and alternatives but at the same it is proved to be a big impediment in the way of development of human interactions.

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IELTS Writing Task II - IELTS Academic

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 172, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: However
...ering into the DNA of our daily routine.However it doesnt necessarily mean that everyon...
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Line 1, column 172, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...ering into the DNA of our daily routine.However it doesnt necessarily mean that everyon...
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Line 1, column 183, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...the DNA of our daily routine.However it doesnt necessarily mean that everyone is alway...
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Line 1, column 329, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ot agree with the above statement which i will explain in this essay. In the f...
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Line 3, column 255, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...y of development of human interactions.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, in the first place

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 15.0 41.998997996 36% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 517.0 1615.20841683 32% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 101.0 315.596192385 32% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11881188119 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.17015387972 4.20363070211 75% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.38845384343 2.80592935109 121% => OK
Unique words: 71.0 176.041082164 40% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.70297029703 0.561755894193 125% => OK
syllable_count: 175.5 506.74238477 35% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 3.0 16.0721442886 19% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 33.0 20.2975951904 163% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 83.7615663655 49.4020404114 170% => OK
Chars per sentence: 172.333333333 106.682146367 162% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.6666666667 20.7667163134 162% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.0 7.06120827912 184% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.38176352705 46% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0892440501463 0.244688304435 36% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.057045064466 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0301501826793 0.0667982634062 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0602756230958 0.151304729494 40% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0402890492153 0.056905535591 71% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.5 13.0946893788 149% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 29.52 50.2224549098 59% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 7.44779559118 196% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.3 11.3001002004 153% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.01 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.65 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 78.4519038076 36% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 21.5 9.78957915832 220% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 15.2 10.1190380762 150% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 22.4719101124 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 9
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