Internet is the invention of the century, a combination of vast information and entertainment readily available to anyone with ease of latest gadgets is so called internet. Handheld devices and laptops and are the most common source to search the vast universe of knowledge. Further in the the essay we will discuss the advantages and disadvantages of internet.
To outset the disadvantages, internet has become the time killer for everyone, its has spoiled many and it really doesn't matter what generation people belongs to. The invention of internet was for communication but innovators explored it more and developed world wide wide web and most commonly called WWW and thereafter things started changing and today it used for shopping, chatting, communication, and everything out of our imagination. Whats wrong with all this is that it has made most of us as uncivilized and now people don't go out to shop, meeting friends and family and does all of these at their ease while sitting in air condition rooms and ultimately spoiling their immune and bodies.
In contrast there are many advantages over the disadvantages if the facility is used with responsibility and determination, In nut shell there are only few detrimental effects. quick communication, distant video calling and lots of entertainment for every age are few examples. The most important are web lectures which promotes growth, diversity and encourage student to study more prove themselves, all this wasn't there 20 years back. Immaterial of its vulnerabilities it is still used by every organization, every sector to transmit data from one place to another because its quick.
A great scholar said that " With great power comes great responsibility" To summarize if the internet is used with responsibility then it is beneficial otherwise it have powers to stop the world.
- Some people say that Internet is the most important invention. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 56
- Xenophobia has accelerated rapidly in the Western countries. According to you what solutions can be proposed by the government and individuals? 88
- Some people say that Internet is the most important invention. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 84
- In some countries with widespread use if internet, people are able to work or study from home, instead of having to travel to work or college. Do the advantage of this outweigh the disadvantages? Discuss and state your own opinion. 22
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: of the latest
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Suggestion: Further,
... search the vast universe of knowledge. Further in the the essay we will discuss the ad...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: the
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Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'the' or 'the' is left.
Suggestion: the; the
... vast universe of knowledge. Further in the the essay we will discuss the advantages an...
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Suggestion: doesn't
...one, its has spoiled many and it really doesnt matter what generation people belongs t...
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Suggestion: worldwide
...novators explored it more and developed world wide wide web and most commonly called WWW a...
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Suggestion: worldwide
...novators explored it more and developed world wide wide web and most commonly called WWW a...
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... and everything out of our imagination. Whats wrong with all this is that it has made...
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Suggestion: don't
...ost of us as uncivilized and now people dont go out to shop, meeting friends and fam...
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Suggestion: contrast,
...spoiling their immune and bodies. In contrast there are many advantages over the disa...
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Suggestion: Quick
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Suggestion: wasn't
...o study more prove themselves, all this wasnt there 20 years back. Immaterial of its ...
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...lity then it is beneficial otherwise it have powers to stop the world.
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...wise it have powers to stop the world.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, really, so, still, then, while, as for, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1572.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 298.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.27516778523 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.14432216186 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.604026845638 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 502.2 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 58.3426753637 49.4020404114 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 142.909090909 106.682146367 134% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.0909090909 20.7667163134 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.45454545455 7.06120827912 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.01903807615 299% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.12581965899 0.244688304435 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0445280204551 0.084324248473 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0335243203199 0.0667982634062 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0682923663269 0.151304729494 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0412816521369 0.056905535591 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.0 13.0946893788 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.61 50.2224549098 71% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.64 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.06 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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