In some countries, young people are encouraged for work or travel for a year between finishing high school and starting university studies. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages for young people why decide to do this?
In the modern era ,of education and development adolescents in certain countries are encouraged for work or travel. For a year between completing secondary education and beginning tertiary education. In this essay ,I am going to examine the question from both points of view
On me one side of the argument there are people who argue that the Disadvantes of considerobly outweigh it's advantages the main reason for believing this is that students travelling for work before higher education instils global exposure and connectivity it is also possible to say that the individuals obtain the opportunity to learn about the work culture before hand which is a benefit for them at a letter stage and after back increase experience which is choose stream on good illustration of this is believed that candidates who have prior work knowledge perform well at workplace after acquiring jobs
On the other hand It is also possible to make this opposing case .It is often argued that infact candidate brake for study Intrust people study time like work and life people often have this opinion because first school provide a one year this is a westage of Time people decrease intrust of study .and one year gap .A second point of that If the students do not have a moral support to guide them they are foced to become aloof .They get a feel of islocation in such new environment
As we have a seen those are number of answers to this question on balance however, I tend to believe that working before starting their university education provide both advantages as well as disadvantages there fore It is necessary to outweigh the benefits against the drawbacks carefully
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, second, so, well, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1388.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 282.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9219858156 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66571395385 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.58865248227 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 457.2 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 3.0 16.0721442886 19% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 94.0 20.2975951904 463% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 645.729045343 49.4020404114 1307% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 462.666666667 106.682146367 434% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 94.0 20.7667163134 453% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 24.3333333333 7.06120827912 345% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 18.0 5.01903807615 359% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.295001258708 0.244688304435 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.194210426761 0.084324248473 230% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0369285479751 0.0667982634062 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.166474720221 0.151304729494 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0395111348801 0.056905535591 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 48.7 13.0946893788 372% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -23.93 50.2224549098 -48% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 19.3 7.44779559118 259% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 40.0 11.3001002004 354% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 12.44 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 12.11 8.58950901804 141% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 21.5 9.78957915832 220% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 39.6 10.1190380762 391% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 40.0 10.7795591182 371% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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