In some countries young people are encouraged to work or travel for a year between finishing school and starting university studies.

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In some countries young people are encouraged to work or travel for a year between finishing school and starting university studies.

Many people believe that before furthering your education, you should gain experience by visiting places or work within a year in the gap between starting the university and finishing the high school. This essay will take a closer look at the matters, showing my opinion and giving fair reasons to support it.

On the one hand, it is true to say that there are factors leading to think that it could be advantage of working or traveling abroad. First, by visiting another country you will gain a valuable experience which will help you for your career, studies or life. Second, those who are choosing to help themselves in future studies are participating in programs helping them to boost the needed experience, for example: students who are going to study in university or college but they are lacking of the required background, are choosing to look for companies which are providing a summer jobs or educational preparing programs. Third, the achieved experience during that gap between the school and university will increase the student’s interest even more.

On the other hand, the forementioned might not be completely true because, firstly, by traveling or working abroad in between the gap starting university and finishing high school it could lead to a distraction and might be jeopardizes his future studying. In addition, it is very hard decision to make, choosing to work abroad or directly to start the university after finishing the high school.

In conclusion, there are evidences providing that claims are there, yet I am inclined to agree with the first mentioned.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 312, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... and giving fair reasons to support it. On the one hand, it is true to say that ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, look, second, so, third, for example, in addition, in conclusion, it is true, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1340.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 261.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13409961686 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77323713971 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.567049808429 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 411.3 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 80.4321660366 49.4020404114 163% => OK
Chars per sentence: 148.888888889 106.682146367 140% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.0 20.7667163134 140% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.3333333333 7.06120827912 189% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.286035980103 0.244688304435 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10954123725 0.084324248473 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.091071950303 0.0667982634062 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149601036032 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.095156988542 0.056905535591 167% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.2 13.0946893788 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.04 50.2224549098 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.07 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.89 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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