The figure gives information about smoking habits of the UK population by age
The figure gives information about smoking habits of the UK population by age. Overall, there are who never smoke , ex-smokers , light smokers and heavy smokers between the ages 16 to 74.
In brief, the never smokers between the age 16-24 have 60% but in age 25-34 they decreased by 5% and in age 35-44 increase by 3% and followed by little decreasing 3% between the age 45-56.Between 55-65age decrease by 2% also by 5% between the age 65-74.However, the ex-smokers throughout the ages 16 to 75 kept the highest point around 98%.
In contrast, the light-smokers and heavy smokers are more than those who have never smoke. Between the age 16-24 the light smoker have been around 70% to 98% but the 25-34 aged people by 3% and keep decreasing by 10% between the age 25-34, 35-44, 45-54.However,between the age 55-64 increase by 5% and followed by 2% between the age 65-75
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...r smokers between the age 16-24 have 60% but in age 25-34 they decreased by 5% an...
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...34 they decreased by 5% and in age 35-44 increase by 3% and followed by little d...
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...creased by 5% and in age 35-44 increase by 3% and followed by little decreasing ...
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...tle decreasing 3% between the age 45-56.Between 55-65age decrease by 2% also by 5% betw...
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...ween the age 25-34, 35-44, 45-54.However,between the age 55-64 increase by 5% and follow...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, so, in brief, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 33.7804878049 92% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 724.0 965.302439024 75% => OK
No of words: 152.0 196.424390244 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.76315789474 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.51124308557 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88033678996 2.65546596893 108% => OK
Unique words: 78.0 106.607317073 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.513157894737 0.547539520022 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 196.2 283.868780488 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 8.94146341463 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 22.4926829268 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 104.293048666 43.030603864 242% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 144.8 112.824112599 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.4 22.9334400587 133% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 5.23603664747 172% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 11.0 1.69756097561 648% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.271844087851 0.215688989381 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.27139484379 0.103423049105 262% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.365136175118 0.0843802449381 433% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.250114890093 0.15604864568 160% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.187788959087 0.0819641961636 229% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 13.2329268293 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.41 61.2550243902 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.92 11.4140731707 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.51 8.06136585366 93% => OK
difficult_words: 23.0 40.7170731707 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.9970731707 127% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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