Proportion of populatio aged 65 and over.
The graph illustrate how the population of aged 65 and over has increased between the ages(1940-2040) in three different countries.Overall, While the percentage of aged population 65 and over in Sweden and the USA have increased throughout the years almost equally. Japan remain below 5%.However, by 2040 is going to increase.
In 1940 the USA and Sweden were between 7% and 9%. In 1980 still they are increasing in almost equal percentage around 15% but Sweden , only after few years increased by 20% in 2018, while in these ages(1990-2018) USA was just below 15%, although they will reach around 26% in 2040.
In contrast, Japan remain below 5% for the years (1940-2000), nevertheless after 2000 year is going to increase by 27% in 2040.
In conclusion, by the given information we can see, while the USA and Sweden we leading throughout the year(1940-2020) japan was below 5%.However, in 2025 reached the significant 27%.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, nevertheless, still, while, in conclusion, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 33.7804878049 101% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 774.0 965.302439024 80% => OK
No of words: 153.0 196.424390244 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05882352941 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.51700396316 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01010273949 2.65546596893 113% => OK
Unique words: 87.0 106.607317073 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.56862745098 0.547539520022 104% => OK
syllable_count: 207.0 283.868780488 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.07073170732 374% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.36585365854 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 80.4231862642 43.030603864 187% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.0 112.824112599 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.5 22.9334400587 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.0 5.23603664747 229% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 1.69756097561 589% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.104074208957 0.215688989381 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.046926409076 0.103423049105 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.104930640634 0.0843802449381 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.062408873536 0.15604864568 40% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.108095339807 0.0819641961636 132% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.2329268293 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 61.2550243902 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 11.4140731707 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.56 8.06136585366 94% => OK
difficult_words: 26.0 40.7170731707 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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