in some countries younger people are losing interest in teaching proffesion why is this happening what can be done to improve the situation
In different countries, careers' pats such as teaching are not followed anymore by youngsters like they were before. The problem could be found in the difficulties that a teacher or professor encounter during their career, starting with low salaries and low recognition. Despite being so important in our society, not so much is done to improve kids' interest in this profession, but this can still change.
On one hand, children have a very small interest in becoming educators because they do not see their teachers love this profession anymore. The salary for a schoolteacher in some countries is, unfortunately, so low that it does not even meet the minimum wage. Most of Medicine's professors in Italy, for example, teach classes but are not being paid. Schools' teachers, furthermore, are vexed by children's parents who accuse them to be the cause of their children's bad behavior and low grades. It is not a surprise that young kids decide to pursue different, more appealing and promising careers, because teaching doesn't sound rewarding anymore.
As a result, our society should not let the figure of educators fall into a deep dark hole, but instead, it should be included and considered as a fundamental part of our society. What could be done is raising the minimum wage for teachers and professors and open more job positions in order to hire many of them as government employees and take advantage of the benefits. By giving schoolteachers the recognition they deserve, children could be able to experience what this profession is really about, and probably fall back in love with this career.
To conclude, as pillars of society and community that will come, these figures should be given more importance, just like doctors and engineers, in order to create a new generation of passionate and loving educators.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 613, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...and promising careers, because teaching doesnt sound rewarding anymore. As a result,...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, really, so, still, for example, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1525.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 301.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06644518272 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81047021679 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.598006644518 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 476.1 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 34.2989309843 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.083333333 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0833333333 20.7667163134 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.16666666667 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.195518658488 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0675530885287 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.055117109855 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108132835122 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0527028048035 0.056905535591 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.92 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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