In many countries, it is common for children if they try as best as they can, they can accomplish anything. To some extent, this message can be advantageous to children as it can motivate them to chase their dreams, but it can cause some negative consequences.
One the one hand, it is beneficial for the young generation in many ways if they are encouraged to work hard. Since children are at the age of five or six, they may have a lot of dreams and are told to think everything is possible. When becoming an adult, they set their mind that trying their best to pursue their passions and dreams can make their dreams become reality, it can help push themselves to become the best version of themselves through hard-working and positive mind. Moreover, even when they fail, it can keep children encouraged. In other words, when children become adults and starting chasing their dreams, they certainly face with challenges and problems. Being taught that hard-working and perseverance will get them through, they will not give up and stay motivated and positive. If they are patient and try hard enough, they make their dreams come true and get what they want as this message say.
On the other hand, sending this message to children might lead to some drawbacks. One of the obvious disadvantages of this message is that some children may have several mental health problems. In some cases, they put too much pressure on themselves to make a large attempt as much as they possible. As a consequence, when they cannot reach the goals as they expect, they may fortune themselves for a long time, and they then may suffer from anxiety, depression and isolation. Furthermore, it may be hard for children to manage stress and deal with pressure because they do not know how to balance studying and relaxing. As this will negatively impact on their mental health and behavior, those children can be frustrated adults and behave in a negative way.
To sum up, despite of some positive results of being told that trying hard enough can gain everything, children might deal with some mental health issues such as depression and frustration.
- In some cultures children are often told that they can achieve anything if they try hard enough What are the advantages and disadvantages of giving children this massage 67
- Some people claim that not enough of the waste from homes is recycled They say that the only way to increase recycling is for governments to make it a legal requirement To what extent do you think laws are needed to make people recycle more of their waste 73
- At the present time the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults compared with the number of older people Do you think that the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages 84
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 741, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a negative way" with adverb for "negative"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...ren can be frustrated adults and behave in a negative way. To sum up, despite of some positive...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, may, moreover, so, then, such as, in other words, in some cases, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 21.0 7.85571142285 267% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 50.0 24.0651302605 208% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1777.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 366.0 315.596192385 116% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85519125683 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37391431897 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57920168775 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.48087431694 0.561755894193 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 525.6 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 5.43587174349 276% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 2.10420841683 333% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.9512350666 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.0625 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.875 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.1875 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.450431670427 0.244688304435 184% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.169897639224 0.084324248473 201% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0708385537983 0.0667982634062 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.303676659897 0.151304729494 201% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0552573535091 0.056905535591 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 50.2224549098 132% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.27 8.58950901804 85% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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