: Some education systems make students focus on certain subjects at the age of 15, while others require students to study a wide range of subjects until they leave school. What are the benefits of each system? Which is better?
In this day and age, more and more contemporary attention has been placed on whether it is more beneficial for students to concentrate on certain subjects at school or to learn various subjects. While each education system has its own benefits, I still believe that these systems should force students to study a variety of subjects.
On the one hand, there are some advantages for students to focus on a limited number of subjects. Firstly, students can be less likely to suffer from stress as a lot of homework and assignments are reduced, so they will have more free time to relax and entertain. It is not to mention the fact that students can focus intensively on every subject, which would assist them to get deeper insight into the lessons taught at school. As a result, their academic performances will improve significantly.
On the other hand, I am of the education systems that require students to learn a wide range of subjects. To be more specific, students can obtain more knowledge and experience in different aspects of life; thus, they will easily adapt to various environments in the future. In addition, if students study a variety of subjects, they can help them to know which one would be the most suitable for their further study. Take myself as an example, thanks to learning 13 subjects at school, I could find out my passions and strength in chemistry, which allowed me to follow this subject and chose it as my major in the university.
In conclusion, while every education system has its own upsides, I still hold the belief that the systems that force students to study a variety of subjects is better.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, so, still, thus, while, in addition, in conclusion, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1359.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 282.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.81914893617 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66046557176 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.54609929078 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 419.4 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 40.4462708596 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.545454545 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.6363636364 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.27272727273 7.06120827912 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.402453669938 0.244688304435 164% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.150386908477 0.084324248473 178% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0961093002936 0.0667982634062 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.256644369687 0.151304729494 170% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0446587220269 0.056905535591 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.18 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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