Some experts believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary school rather than secondary school. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?
Nowadays, the foreign language becoming controversial in several communities because of some reasons. Most of experts say that it is the good way to teach children start in primary school than the next education. Many advantages and this advantages of this statement.
On the positive side, as we know that the development of era is increase significantly therefore we need a skill in language to handle the main competition caused by this change of growing. For example, the English is international language in whole the world, consequently the society of countries which are not use English as daily language should be learn it because most of the programs tend to utilize of it, such as any application on internet, the international new on TV or radio use English, meanwhile it will the best if the people understand about it. As result, base on the facts todays, to following a rise of situation needed great ability in foreign language to balance the modern environment. In conclusion, it will given a better live in the future to the children who started learn it when they were still young.
On the negative side, the neighbor hood is the paramount attention for all the parents because it can decide anything that will happen, as of there are several damages for the people who are not supported in skill of language when they are still young. The first, this situation will make them difficult to register in university or apply for a professional job. The second, they can not attend the modern situation, they will experience a remainder, moreover it is hard to join on several competition. It is due to the less of practice, learn then the environment unsupported.
To sum up, from my point of view, I prefer to agree that to training the children about the foreign language in primary school is the best way to mastering the foreign language skill as well as the positive impacts of it is will advantage in their future as the main benefit to the children who learn start in child.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 103, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'Most of', you should use 'the' ('Most of the experts') or simply say ''Most experts''.
Suggestion: Most of the experts; Most experts
...al communities because of some reasons. Most of experts say that it is the good way to teach ch...
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Line 3, column 354, Rule ID: SHOULD_BE_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'learned', 'learnt'?
Suggestion: learned; learnt
...use English as daily language should be learn it because most of the programs tend to...
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Line 3, column 733, Rule ID: PRP_PAST_PART[3]
Message: Did you mean 'give' or 'be given'?
Suggestion: give; be given
...ern environment. In conclusion, it will given a better live in the future to the chil...
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Line 5, column 483, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun competition seems to be countable; consider using: 'several competitions'.
Suggestion: several competitions
...mainder, moreover it is hard to join on several competition. It is due to the less of practice, lea...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, if, moreover, second, so, still, then, therefore, well, while, for example, in conclusion, such as, as well as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1661.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 345.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.81449275362 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3097767484 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78050040904 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.504347826087 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 522.0 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 94.7213750369 49.4020404114 192% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.416666667 106.682146367 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.75 20.7667163134 138% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.8333333333 7.06120827912 168% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.265527118248 0.244688304435 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0936598664566 0.084324248473 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.067447297993 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.181255811944 0.151304729494 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0933920034645 0.056905535591 164% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.0946893788 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 50.2224549098 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.21 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.14 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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